Poem 20. YOUR SONG

A Tribute to a Friend

I hear your song echoes in the midst of the  night

With my bare feet, I walk in the dark

Just to see you, the voice that I hear

Never care of the risks I have to bear.

 

 

Your voice guides me where I should go

The echoes are the trails and now I can see you

You tell me some stories which makes me ponder

I laugh at every humorous word while we chatter.

 

 

Who shall forget you as my tour guide?

You lead me into my world, now I don’t have to hide

For I am now complete, an artist of my kind

Your song pushes me up to take pleasure of my mind.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Androglossia]

Beautiful tribute. But to an unkown friend? Now that sounds weird. Don't get me wrong, your poem is full of awesomeness and the gratefulness you felt for that person is made obvious on each line. It's a shame that the person remained unknown. I think an extra mile is needed to give justice to this piece. Great one Miss dhaye!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Yes, an unknown friend the time I'm making this poem, Maryanne. He's the one I mentioned in my featured story before. I only know him in his FB page. We have a short conversation at my page last last night (I as "Hear My Mind", while he's "Songs of the Lucky Unlucky Guy"). I am a fan of his page and regularly liking and sharing his poem at FB so he's wondering who I am. I just said I'm a writer now here in WC and my pen name is Dhaye.
Perhaps, I have to change the description because I saw him already last night. I don't know if he has read that story, or this poem.

When somebody gave me a favor, he's a friend for me.

Thank you for the kind words, Maryanne. :)

[Androglossia]

So he is technically no longer unknown:) That's an interesting way to start a friendship. Well some good things start from strange beginnings. Who knows? It's my pleasure, Miss dhaye!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Haha. Anong interesting way to start a friendship? Bahala siya if ayaw niya ng friendship. Basta ako, nakikipag-friend ako sa kanya dito kasi friends kami sa FB though hindi kami magkakilala doon. Nag-online siya kagabi, pero walang review galing sa kanya. That means deadma. Hehe. Matanda na kasi yun, nahihiya siguro kasi mas matanda pala ko. Lol. :) I never expect of some good things to happen for "some good things never last" (theme song ko yun), buti pang wag na lang. Lol. :) Hindi naman talaga, I'm just grateful kasi siya nagbigay ng link nitong Writerscafe kaya andito ako now. Hmnn... iba naman dating nyang "who knows" na yan. Waley yan..

[Lily Finch]

weird but beautifulllllllll :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for dropping by, Lily Finch. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. Good friends are like gold. I like the song also. Good to hear new version of songs with amazing and beautiful words. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for the visit, CP :)

[Zahra]

Loved this, dhaye! Truly inspirational. Those with such friends in life are truly lucky.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, I Have a Voice. :)

[The dark story]

there are people in our life which has done so much for us that we just can't describe that in words,they guided us in constructing the bridge of our life and filling it with priceless fragrance!! truly such people mark their impression on our mind and becomes hard to forget them...i liked the theme and the style a lot...it's so ravishing to read and elegantly penned that i could just say,"whoa! STUNNING!"...the diction are strong as well and they quite impactful in their usage...amazing write!!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Atiba. I greatly appreciate your compliments. :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Something which cannot be describe in few words are friends.
"I laughed at every humorous word while we chatter." These lines means a lot and I missed my late friend who died in mishap.
It has to be dealt in some other ways Dhaye you simply re-called my old memories with this poem.

Truly cherish every single word you wrote.
Kept me speechless :)

Regards,
Singh :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Singh. :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Welcome Dear :)

[Corset]

I love that song, love this poem, it feels good, and it makes others feel good and that seems to be rare nowadays.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for dropping by, Corset :)

[Rita L. Sev]

What a beautiful poem, a great tribute to someone who has helped you to grow. In your writing, the best way to honor a friend who has encouraged you. Well done!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Rita. :)

[Jack...]

Beautiful Dhaye. You have a kind and caring heart and it shows in your verses.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Jack. I am just grateful to someone who helped me get into WC, and yet I know his FB page only.