Poem 3. LOVE ME AGAIN

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I was your first love.

I know I made your life complete.

With me, your song has the most

Beautiful notes I heard.

With me, your poem had owned their lives.

With me, your artworks became real

Like they have their own spirits.

With me, those stories in your mind

Had known by them.

 

But lately I can feel that you don’t

Love me like before.

Why?

What made you change?

I know there’s still the love you once felt for me.

Let the last ember turn into fire again.

Sing your song once more, I want to hear them.

Make again those poems just like before.

Paint your life again in different colors.

Tell them again with your inspiring stories.

Love me again.

Since I only live with that desire in your heart

To speak your mind

And let them hear and see

How you live by loving me.

For I was your past, but still your present

And will be your future love.

I am your passion. I am Art.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Wow beautiful indeed,loved this ome especialy these lines " Love me again.
Since I only live with that desire in
your heart
To speak your mind
And let them hear and see
How you live by loving me.
For I was your past, but still your
present
And will be your future love.
I am your passion. I am Art."

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, NBM. :)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

My pleasure :)

[lei]

don't let the passion die... a beautiful write, Kabaya.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, lei.

[Brianna Brie]

I usually dislike music set to poetry. However, this magical piece lends to the beauty of each other. Melodies from the heart are sung best. Lovely poem!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Briana. :)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Very clever; the canvas or the subject of the canvas speaks out, she speaks back to the artist, whose love is fading, who is losing faith, fantastic.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sheema. One of my old stuffs is that one I am talking to Art. Now, I made this one like Art is talking to me as my self-motivation to get back into action. Lol.

[Vikrantsingh]

For us you need not to be asking to love you :P We already love you and your poems :)

This is quite a wonderful narration by lover and felt deep inside - Dhaye you made justice with this work of your.

I just got lost and remembered some sweet memories and which linked back to my mind and I smiled again :)

Thanks :)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for the R & R, Singh. This one is the voice of ART as my first love. I had that break in writing and painting because I'm not inspired for some time. Now, I have to motivate myself to get back to my passion.

[Vikrantsingh]

Yes indeed you must :)
Singh :)

[Sami Khalil]

"Sing your song once more, I want to hear them.

Make again those poems just like before.

Paint your life again in different colors.

Tell them again with your inspiring stories.

Love me again.

Since I only live with that desire in your heart

To speak your mind"
Wow. A see a lot of new realizations and confidence of yourself in this write that is commendable and great. It looks like you are deflecting some accusations from some critics or friends that put you down but you are rising above their mean spirit to peove you are better than them or worthy of being an artist...
I could be wrong but that is how I felt...You are an artisit indeed...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

" but you are rising above their mean spirit to prove you are better than them or worthy of being an artist..."

Lol. Those reasons never come in my mind. I believe I should not prove to anyone anything about myself especially rising above someone or proving I am better than anyone. It is their right to give thier own opinions...anyway they don't know me and I'm the one who knows the truth about myself. But I never have to prove anything because I have nothing to show. Lol. I am just a simple writer...an artist in my own ways.

The truth is, I took a break in my writing activity because I just felt I am not inspired during that time. Perhaps, there's a slight truth in what you said... that I am bearing the discomfort by some accusations from some critics or friends that put me down. But it's just a test, isn't it? I have to stay strong if I want to continue my journey.

Are you a psychic, Sami? Lol.

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. I just felt it from the words but you are right and I like your approach to how to deal with them or yourself. But I noticed the confidence like I said and that is commendable. My words were compliments by the way. You are welcome...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Haha. I'm sorry. Many thanks to your compliments. I hope I am confident enough. That poem is my self-motivation to become active again. I am really inspired with those words from you, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[tuvi]

Hey girl ...

that was a nice welcome poem for me (had taken a small break ) ...
getting to your work ...its well crafted loved the flow of words ...

I loved this part alot "Let the last ember turn into fire again.

Sing your song once more, I want to hear them.

Make again those poems just like before.

Paint your life again in different colors.

Tell them again with your inspiring stories.

Love me again."

Good work girl !!!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Tuvi. I believe now that we are not really contradicting. lol.
Welcome poem for you and me. I had also that break in writing, and everything about my passion in Art. So this is a reminder to myself that I can't live without it.

[tuvi]

welcome back to you too in that case :)

[Ency Bearis]

Nice instropection and absolutely loved your passion in art, unique write.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks po, Sir Ency. :)

[Ency Bearis]

you're welcome