Poem 13. IT'S OVER
A Chapter by
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Just a thought
I
thought the rain won't stop anymore. But I was wrong. I opened my window
which has been closed for so long, and there I watch the bright sky with
the moon and those brilliant stars... The downpour is over.
© 2013 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Author's Note
Reviews
The rain always comes back... the window is a portal... closed at times and open to let in the new... the moon and sky... and stars... are always changing... giving rebirth...
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
If we allow ourselves to open that window, we get a glimpse of light, uplifting read Dhaye.
Posted 10 Years Ago
If we allow ourselves to open that window, we get a glimpse of light, uplifting read Dhaye.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks, Frieda. :)
10 Years Ago
Is that you on the piano? :-)
10 Years Ago
No, dear. I have not much time to play my keyboard these school days.
i always believe that the air is at its utmost freshness after a heavy downpour. if that is coupled with the moon and star shining through the night that would make things heavenly. things may end but it would ensue a new beginning.
Posted 10 Years Ago
i always believe that the air is at its utmost freshness after a heavy downpour. if that is coupled with the moon and star shining through the night that would make things heavenly. things may end but it would ensue a new beginning.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks, Gab. :)
Some things come to an end and some must come to an end. You have been waiting patiently for the storm to pass and it did...Hope and perseverance conquered your past...A great write...:)
Posted 10 Years Ago
Some things come to an end and some must come to an end. You have been waiting patiently for the storm to pass and it did...Hope and perseverance conquered your past...A great write...:)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks, Sami. :)
10 Years Ago
You are welcome...:)
Simply and elegantly put - the storm always ends, and the wise are stronger for the weathering... Well penned, Dhaye
Posted 10 Years Ago
Simply and elegantly put - the storm always ends, and the wise are stronger for the weathering... Well penned, Dhaye
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
A rebirth Dhaye. What a lovely poem and full of hope.
X
Posted 10 Years Ago
A rebirth Dhaye. What a lovely poem and full of hope.
X
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you, Anto. :)
Quite happy to have stopped by here.
A refreshing and crisp read.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Quite happy to have stopped by here.
A refreshing and crisp read.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I always believed that the storm shall pass, and it always do. Like every darkness has always a new dawn in the end.
great poem.
Posted 10 Years Ago
I always believed that the storm shall pass, and it always do. Like every darkness has always a new dawn in the end.
great poem.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks, Pax.
10 Years Ago
no probs. :)
The emotion and message is very clear.
The simplicity of your words is right for this topic.
Very well written and true.
Posted 10 Years Ago
The emotion and message is very clear.
The simplicity of your words is right for this topic.
Very well written and true.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks, SquinklaPsyOps. :)
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Added on August 4, 2013
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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye) Philippines
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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream.
I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me.
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