BY YOUR SIDE

A prayer of peace

By your side, my God, I want to rest
There in Your arms I have my perfect peace
I offer You my life, my mind, my soul
Take all of these, my Lord, take them all.

My past, my Lord, is full of miseries
I want to forget it within Your mysteries
Take me, mold me, please hear me now and then
For I am just  human, I can't stand in pain.

By Your side, my God, I want to rest
There in Your arms I have my perfect peace
Send me Your spirit, cleanse me with Your fire
With You by my side, I'm not afraid to fly.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

Terrific write Hear My Mind...
though not a religious person I am a spiritual one and could relate well to this magnificent poem...
It made be feel both hopeful and peaceful...
I loved and appreciated the unforced rhyming...especially the use of near and slant rhyming...not an easy thing to pull off..
Great job
allen

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Allen. Glad you visit this page again.
----HMM

[shangala]

oh my....you are speaking to me dhaye

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Glad you can relate. Thanks for the review. :)

[Ronie Singson]

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/itsroniesingson/1294426/

[shangala]

i got this time... i love the poem... i read it to someone i love... the smile on his face said it all..my daddy... thanks for your writing "YOU"

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful hopeful poem. We must know faith and love to survive. Thank you for the amazing poem and prayer.
Coyote

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, CP.

[Ronie Singson]

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/itsroniesingson/1294426/