Poem 15. WAITING FOR THE RAIN

A Haiku

Rain, rain come again

Let the sprouts and flowers glow

They have been waiting.

 

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

This is another signature piece of yours depicting one of earth's most important life sustaining element.
I have a contrasting Haiku that is an old nursery rhyme

Rain rain go away
Come again another day
Rain rain stay away.

Picture was vividly portrayed, complementing the written words Thanks for sharing Dhaye.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for the remarkable review, Neil.

[lei]

a beautiful Haiku, Kabayan!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Lei.

[gabrielle]

ah, the positive aspect of the rain, it brings life...but hopefully, not too much rain will come for i don't want another flood.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Same here, Gab. That's what I told Sami below. Hehe. I just missed making short poems.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for the visit, ganda.

[Sami Khalil]

Short but soooo beautiful. I love the rain...:)...........

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I love it, too...but not too much like in a storm. LOL
Thanks, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...He or she who desire the rain has to take the storm...lol

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Lol. I think Rain + wind = storm. Wanting the rain alone is not wanting the storm.

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...:).................

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

:) :)

[Sami Khalil]

:)......................