HIDING  (Free Verse)

HIDING (Free Verse)

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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Do we?

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I've heard your voice
Sobbing
Screaming
For the pain you endure
For the broken wings
For the things undone.
I've seen your picture
Behind the mask.
You tried to hide
But your words speak too much
And I can hear the same notes
Of your songs
Your poetry paints the same picture
Of  the rainy days
And of the sleepless nights.
I've heard
The same chant,
I've seen
The same image
When I looked in the mirror...



© 2014 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)



Free Verse (vers libre) Poetry is written in either rhyme or unrhymed lines that have no set fixed metrical pattern.

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Often times when I read a piece of poetry, and when I can relate to it, it mirrors some or huge chunks of my life. In this piece I see myself hiding on the shadows of my past, being restless at night and looking normal at day, well I can't even tell which is normal for me anymore. Very nice piece Dhaye.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

captain

10 Years Ago

Your funny dhaye, :)
I am not color blind yet in times I feel blind :D
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

I just want to make you smile. :)
captain

10 Years Ago

thank you for this :)



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I did not expect that unending! It took me by surprise, I really liked it. Added to my library :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks for dropping by, pro.
Often times when I read a piece of poetry, and when I can relate to it, it mirrors some or huge chunks of my life. In this piece I see myself hiding on the shadows of my past, being restless at night and looking normal at day, well I can't even tell which is normal for me anymore. Very nice piece Dhaye.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

captain

10 Years Ago

Your funny dhaye, :)
I am not color blind yet in times I feel blind :D
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

I just want to make you smile. :)
captain

10 Years Ago

thank you for this :)
Sad yet full of emotion and maybe ...hope? Yes, I think there is hope there too. Excellent. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks , Raymond.
hey,very nice, brave of you to share these kind of peom-strong and dark but also awesome epxression

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

We're here to express ourselves, aren't we?
Thank you for the visit, dear poet.
Oh its a beautiful words yes i can hear the same words 😞 👍

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks for dropping by. :)

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Added on December 11, 2013
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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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