LIKE A CHILD  (Couplets)

LIKE A CHILD (Couplets)

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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Could we?

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Sometimes it's better to be like a child
So innocent and free, but not that wild

There are so simple things to make her calm
Relaxed with what she can hold in her arm

She cries when those things seem so bad and wrong
But smiles when she hears her favorite song

Oh, my love, why shouldn't we have a heart
One which so soft and so pure like a child?




© 2014 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
"The creative adult is the child who survived." ---Anon


Couplet. This type of poem is two lines which may be rhymed or unrhymed.

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Would be nice to have the heart and the mind of a child. Children are not born with hate or fear. I agree with the logic of the poem. We would be more content if we desired to enjoy life, not fight against it. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, CP.



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Would be nice to have the heart and the mind of a child. Children are not born with hate or fear. I agree with the logic of the poem. We would be more content if we desired to enjoy life, not fight against it. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, CP.
That is the truth if we would look at things as innocently as children would be great.They hold no hate or malice .Your poem is lovely and oh so true:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Vidya. :)
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome:)

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Added on December 13, 2013
Last Updated on April 1, 2014
Tags: child, heart, soft, pure, clean, mind, simple

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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