CONTENTMENT (Rhyme)

My response poem to Gabrielle's "Fickle" and a reminder to myself

Ah, human! When will you be contented
With those things at hand, for you, they seem to be rejected?
Human, human, that's not why you've made for
Every little thing is great, treat each one as thing of splendor!

Author's Note

Rhyme. A rhyming poem has the repetition of the same or similar sounds of two or more words, often at the end of the line.

Reviews

[gabrielle]

This is a short philosophical piece on human traits. Most of us would take for granted the things we have on hand. instead of making the best of what we have, we tend to be wishing for something else. with few lines, you were able to impart the things most of us often forget.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Gab.
Exchange gift??? Hehehe. Merry Christmas!

[Pax]

The most complex thing to content is the desire for something, a human trait that is hard to erase. We all feel those from time to time it is just a matter on reminding ourselves that every little thing have something to offer, have something to be thankful about. We all know life brings many unexpected surprises, we just have to open our eyes to many possibilites along the way. That's what I believed in that is why I have survive this far in life, always do keep reminding myself to be thankful despite everything dispiteful in mind. Very short and profound my pretty friend.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, my very understanding friend, brother and guidance counselor here and there (FB). =)
Glad you're really back here.

[Pax]

guidance counselor...lol, parang baksak ako niyan before..hehe, but I am glad to have come back. Your welcome!