Poem 22.   SET ME FREE

Poem 22. SET ME FREE

A Chapter by Dhaye
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Inspired by the song "Set Me Free" by Casting Crowns

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I've been crying for so long
With this aching and somber song
Oh, why did you come along
Just to prove me I am wrong?

I've been trying to heal my scars
Those bruises I've gotten through the wars
The things I want, they're like the stars
The people I like, they're just too harsh.

I've been waiting for the time
That my tune would fit your rhyme 
I've been thinking if a mime
Could be enough to show what's mine?

Set me free from these aching chain
You are the light, don't trap me in vain
Take away my tears and pain
Once again, heal me with your rain...





© 2014 Dhaye



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Dhaye
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I enjoyed this poem so much that I decided to make a song of it. It inspired me to wrote this gift song-poem for you to keep as your own. Some of your original lines are in it. It has seven syllable 1/0/1/0/1/0/1 meter where “1” is accented and “0” is not accented. Sing along with the bouncing ball:

Melancholy Song

I’ve been singing all yearlong
this cold melancholy song.
You should not have come on strong
knowing that we don’t belong.

As I try to heal my scars,
all those heavyhearted mars,
I’m still looking towards the stars
over rubble and burnt chars.

I’ve been waiting all this time
for a tune to fit your rhyme.
I’ve been looking for that chime
that would truly make you mine.

Please release me from this chain;
shine your light through clouds and rain:
wipe my tears so I remain
once again in your domain.


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Your pieces are better songs, I supposed...so you can make a better album. LOL.
Glad you enjoy.. read more
Aethereal

3 Years Ago

Once I organize a chorus of singing chipmunks, I should be on my way since all of my poems are song.. read more
Dhaye

3 Years Ago

............. =)



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Ahhh really mince work, I really love that last line because you know I love rain and find it spiritually healing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

I agree, the rain can heal a wounded soul.
Thanks so much, cowboy.
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

3 Years Ago

You are most welcome sweetie.


I enjoyed this poem so much that I decided to make a song of it. It inspired me to wrote this gift song-poem for you to keep as your own. Some of your original lines are in it. It has seven syllable 1/0/1/0/1/0/1 meter where “1” is accented and “0” is not accented. Sing along with the bouncing ball:

Melancholy Song

I’ve been singing all yearlong
this cold melancholy song.
You should not have come on strong
knowing that we don’t belong.

As I try to heal my scars,
all those heavyhearted mars,
I’m still looking towards the stars
over rubble and burnt chars.

I’ve been waiting all this time
for a tune to fit your rhyme.
I’ve been looking for that chime
that would truly make you mine.

Please release me from this chain;
shine your light through clouds and rain:
wipe my tears so I remain
once again in your domain.


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Your pieces are better songs, I supposed...so you can make a better album. LOL.
Glad you enjoy.. read more
Aethereal

3 Years Ago

Once I organize a chorus of singing chipmunks, I should be on my way since all of my poems are song.. read more
Dhaye

3 Years Ago

............. =)
Beautiful, sincere and courageous!
Wonderful work....songs are such a good source of inspiration

Posted 3 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Thank you. Thank you. And more thank you's... :)
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
This poem is so nostalgic. I love it, and the song you chose for it. Can you tell me how you set up the music with the story?

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Thanks.

Okay. Just go to You Tube, choose the apt music. Click share on the right side.. read more
Omegax45

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
Dhaye

3 Years Ago

You're welcome.
A truelly loveable poem and so well created that it touch my heart so. beautiful.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Thanks, Ssadd.
Such pain in this one Dhaye. I feel for you.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Star.
This poem has the most perfect and gorgeous rhyming scheme I have ever come across. I really loved this write...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Divya.
A heartfelt piece. Nicely penned.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Thanks, Praveeta. =)
Praveeta

3 Years Ago

You are welcome.
I'm here ...you want praise of. critique . I'll come back to dissect it .

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Ano na naman yan? Pasabog na naman. Lahatin mo sa isang comment ha? Para isang edit lang...huwag gay.. read more
This is a song in itself, Dhaye. A strong piece, deeply emotive.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

3 Years Ago

Thanks, Rita. =)

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