FRIENDS  ( Nonet)

FRIENDS ( Nonet)

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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My first attempt to write a NONET

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You are the one who makes me happy
You’re always there to inspire me
I can run only to you
You’ve been my angel, dear
I won’t surrender
I won’t give up
Forever
We’ll be
Friends…



© 2014 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Nonet - is a nine line poem. With 1st line containing 9 syllables, 2nd line - 8 syllables, 3rd line - 7 syllables, 4th line - 6 syllables, 5th line - 5 syllables, 6th line - 4 syllables, 7th line - 3 syllables, 8th line - 2 syllables, 9th line one syllable.

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Very nice job on this Dhaye and it looks like fun. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Star. Good morning there!
We learn to stretch our mind and "play" with our words. Form to fit life and life to fit form. Did this "speak" your tones or did you speak it's form? THAT is the ultimate question we ask when we ...play.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

" Poetic forms seem like "games" and many match the rules and miss the heart."...Nice line to ponder.. read more
Chris

10 Years Ago

New thoughts, new flow... more you than before.
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Hehe. You counted the "you's"? But the title became "Friends".
Or...new thoughts, new flow..... read more
An overwhelmingly romantic nonet. Beautifully written, Dh! Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Lydi. :)
Written with lot of passions, heart mind and soul. Simply enjoyed your poetry simple, honest and direct.

I been to yiur beautiful country, was staying in Manila and was staying in Marriott hotel opposite corniche.

Stay cool

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thank you, AA. Glad you reached our country. =)
This is really nice . Only you I adore . Possible alternative ending .

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

My first attempt in writing a NONET poem. Thanks for peeking in.
Author Unknown

10 Years Ago

No idea that such writing style exist . You're very talented
Beautiful and sincere words in the poem. I do believe love need to be proven with words and action. I like the purpose and reason for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thank you, CP.
We are one, body and soul
Only for you I fall
thanks for this new knowledge. For my view this is a good formet of poem. But you created a lovely piece of art. Beautifully crafted.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Ssadd. =)

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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