FACING THE DAWN (Free Verse)

The night never stay forever...

There's a promise
A fulfillment of my once biggest dream
To find you
To be with you
Among the many faces I've seen
You stood right there
Wearing the smile
That only I could see

You held my hand
And guided me
Into the dark alley
And I never felt any fear
Because you're there

I slept
While you were watching me
Like an angel by my side
Protecting me from harm
Assuring nothing
Would steal my comfort

And when I woke up
It's no longer dark in my room
The night has ended
And I have to face the new day
It's the first light I saw
When I glanced at my window

I'm facing the dawn
With you here by my side

I'm not afraid anymore...

Author's Note

For my bestfriend...


Credits to: Google images
Music: "You're My Best Friend" by Jason Reeves



Free Verse (vers libre) Poetry is written in either rhyme or unrhymed lines that have no set fixed metrical pattern.

Reviews

[Eddie Davis]

A very touching poem, that reminded me, for some reason of the 23rd Psalm. Perhaps there is a good reason for that. I hope that the hope and peace in this poem is a reality in your life on this Valentine's Day, Dhaye. A close friend is something very marvelous and I hope you always face your dawns, and midnights, together.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks so much, Eddie. Yes, my bestfriend is very marvelous and I'll always thank God for having this person in my life.

[paul sal.....]

Touching, beautiful, warm, light, loving, I sense your friend is a metaphor, for it seems he gets very little sleep, no doubt reflected in the window of you life

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you for dropping by!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Nothing last forever including the dark… figuratively and literally… There is a wonderful spirituality about this poem I admire.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, Cowboy! It's nice to see you again on my page.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure… it is great to be back.

[Blue]

"I'm facing the dawn
With you here by my side

I'm not afraid anymore..."

You wrote from the heart, Ate. Your best friend would surely be honored to know this is dedicated to her.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks so much, sis.

[Giggling Star]

Very sweet poem to your friend Dahye. I've changed my avatar and display name (stargazer). Haven't seen you around much. Everything ok? Not getting any RR from you. Miss you.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Yes, everything's ok. And I'm glad to see you here on my page. I miss you, too. Hope you're fine and may God grant all your heart's wishes. I'm not sending any RR now. I see it that the writers here are being stressed with so much RR's. I want everyone to enjoy being here. Everyone is welcome to review any piece from me. Always smile. =)

[Tina Louise UK]

Beautifully touching...really enjoyed :) x

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Tia. =)

[NeiL ArandA]

And the picture say it all. It paints a thousand words.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Neil. Your short statement describes a thousand words, too.

[NeiL ArandA]

Its perfect for your piece :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

............ :)

[NeiL ArandA]

He is very bless to have a friend like you ...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I'm more blessed, Neil. I'm just an imperfect one...I have many flaws. I'm just so grateful that someone is praying for me...have that concern...without any intention but to share his heart to other people.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Anyway, this is for those who value their friends and their friendship.

[NeiL ArandA]

Ha Ha I love the song ! Never heard that one before...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Why did you laugh? Is it funny? LOL. I'm serious and emotional here while you are laughing there.read moreWhy did you laugh? Is it funny? LOL. I'm serious and emotional here while you are laughing there.
I'll be off in few minutes. Thanks for dropping by once more, bro.

[gabrielle]

These lines:

I slept
"While you were watching me
Like an angel by my side
Protecting me from harm
Assuring nothing
Would steal my comfort"

reminded me of an old song "someone to watch over me", a song my mom used to hum. Touching piece, Dhaye.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks so much, Gab. Glad you came by.
BTW, have you eaten all your cup cakes? LOL. Nice avatar, cutie!

[gabrielle]

Sold out. Thanks. I just miss my long messy hair =)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

After the cupcakes, what's next? Hehe. You're a dynamic person, Naning. And super humble...If ever you have new products, don't forget to send me a free taste. LOL

[don't know]

"I'm facing the dawn
With you here by my side

I'm not afraid anymore" touching poem nice write.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, dk. =)

[Rachelle]

Sincere and tender. May the friendship flourish and prosper.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, sweetie. =)

[Antoñyo]

Aaaaawesome sis! Possibly your best...certainly one of my favs by you..You get better and better!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks a lot, bro.