YOUR FAITH

Just a little craft I made for a challenge using the 5 words- bellow, below, shinned, shone, and dwell.

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Don't be afraid to show your feeling
Get out and bellow if you want
Show them the seeds that dwell in your being
But do not express them in a rant

Do not put your self-image below
Nobody would love you except you
They will never see something will grow
Those who shinned away from you

Keep in your heart that faith, my dear
That one that had shone here and everywhere!

Author's Note

A little craft for my 'Voice of Faith' collection

Reviews

[gabrielle]

Dhaye, this piece reminded me of Desiderata. It has calming effect on me.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Gab.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

We cannot please everyone and we shouldn't, what matters is what your heart wants, those who love you will support you no matter what. A very uplifting and posiitively inspiring poem.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, cowboy!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome young lady.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

As for the challenge and the rhyme scheme also...
I see this gives more than expected...
the way this comes out with inspiration...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Glen.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[Pax]

Your faith is ever stronger like our good friend and brother Neil... keep it up my pretty friend...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Ssshhh...that's my output at SC. Yung sinasabi ko sa iyo. Actually, nauuna ako now gumawa doon ng tula kasi yung challenges ang magiging muse mo doon para makagawa ka ng piece kasi you should consider the requirements given. Kaya ayan, iba-iba na ang concepts ko. Hehe.
Nakapasyal ka na ba doon?

[Pax]

oo, okay naman siya, pasyal pasyal lng, yun lang, then wala na...haha. okay yan, it keeps your writing on the edge... ako i only write when my emotions is too heavy na, or kung magsusulat nang review... hehe :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I'm putting now my poems from HMM 4 to MY POETRY AND I. Can you suggest another title of the book? Kasi temporary lang talaga yung Poetry and I...forms and kinds of poetry kasi yun. Sige na. I want to work on the book this vacation. Paubos na uli load ko myang gabi. Nanakot pa. LOL.

[Pax]

sandali check ko, mag dependi kasi yan sa content nang mga poems mo, baka halo-halo yun, kaya nahihirapan ka........

[Pax]

kaka -check ko lng, sa glossary palng halo halo na... may ice cream kaya to...LOL

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Anong glossary? Wla pa ngang glossary yun...Yung poetry and I, different kinds of poetry kaya nga iba-iba yan...From A-Z ang forms na yan tapos andaming samples....oh, di ba. Napaka-simple naman ng Poetry and I, temporary lang yun...esep-esep naman jan, please....hangga't may time pa. Brownout na naman dito. Huhu!
Ice cream??? Pag-uwi mo, tatambakan kita ng ice cream. Sabihin mo kay Gab, order ako ng cupcake, pangsuhol ko kamo sa iyo. Hehe

[Pax]

sorry i mean table of contents... magulo, ang poem numbers hindi in order, kunin mo nlng kung hindi in order yung numbers iwan mo nlng yung title... may dalawa pang poem 2, magkaiba naman yung title... halo halo talaga yung concept nito noh,it is a form of compilation ito...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Hoy, wag mong intinfihin yan. Kapag kino-compile ko na..that means malapit ko na syang e-publish as a book. Hindi naman ganyan yan dito sa file ko. Syempre, now ko pa nga lang nilalagay sa book yan kaya magulo jan....para maitago ko na pag book na talaga. Hirap nga mag-edit kasi nga yung iba galing sa HMM Vol 4 kayta may mga number. Tatanggalin ko lahat ng number nyan pero matrabaho talaga.

[Pax]

tangalin mo na, para arranged siya tingnan...
compilation nga siya... hirap gawan nang title...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Yung A-Z ...from Acrostic to Zejel kinds/forms of poetry. Kaya napapansin mo, yung author's note ko palagi about kung anong kind/form of poetry ang piece na yun. Educational kasi sya, requested by my co-teacher who's an English teacher.

[Pax]

dapat separated yung inspired sa yung may poetry learning types... diba.
suggestion: dapat lahat nang inspired ay sa dito lang sa Poetry and I, kasi inspired...
then yung may mga educational tips, sa ibang libro, like - Poetry and learning...
yung mga quotes of wisdom, separate rin yun...
then yung mga happy thoughts and silly thoughts, pwde na sa poetry and i, or separate mo rin lahat nang mga funny pieces mo, dependi sayo...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Lahat yan ay may poetry types/forms nga nga, Manong. Nilalagyan ko now sa title para ma-distinguish na sila na forms of poetry. Title ang kailangan ko. Okay na ba yung Poetry and I?

[Pax]

pwde na....

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

O, sige na nga. Sa hinaba-haba ng kunsumisyon...doon din pala ang tuloy. LOL

[Pax]

hahaha, okay naman talaga yun, LOL, so meaning walang ice cream... ;(

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Hmnn...sounds like we both avoid to think (you) and to give (I). LOL. So, quits na talaga. Ha ha!

[NeiL ArandA]

Splendid thoughts you conjured here Dhaye. You seems to have acquired the taste for spiritual poems and piece. Keep going ...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Neil. Your kind words are appreciated here. =)