CRITICAL  (Triolet)

CRITICAL (Triolet)

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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Do we really see?

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We kept an eye to something different
Ears were open while mind was close
A pole looked straight though it was bent
We kept an eye to something different

In these given days to pray and repent
While a medicine should be taken in dose
We kept an eye to something different
Ears were open while mind was close





© 2014 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Triolet

A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital letters representing the repeated lines.

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Added on April 19, 2014
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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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