glass bird

a random scribble

glass
breakable
fragile

you can't fix me
once i am broken
so take good care of me

i
  am
      a
       glass
              bird
i
  am
      breakable
i
    am
        fragile

Author's Note

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem told the the truth. People are easily broken. When we learn to lead with kindness and love. Would be a better world. The poem was skillfully written and made the reader feel the true emotion of the amazing poetry. Thank you.
Coyote

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you for reading this piece and for the compliment.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Would be a good lead for a book of poetry.

[Antoñyo]

There is great courage in exposing our vulnerabilities. You do this often with the ease that should be envied. It adds power to your words.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

The idea came upon seeing a photo of a glass bird placed in a window. I feel not comfortable with its position because it might fall down and maybe broken into pieces.

Thank you so much for dropping by, A. Good to see you again, my favorite writer.

[Aethereal]

Positive moods are being solidified, and shattered all the time; like glass birds. Positive moods are so much like beautiful glass artifacts. This free verse poem is one of your best. It flows throughout its structure.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you.

[I Am Svetlana]

I thought this was beautiful and the picture fits so well! Every person has a part of glass to them. No one is all steel. We must possess a soft side in order to be considered 'human'.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Yes, the fragility of one's heart is like a glass. So we have to take care of it because something like it when broken cannot be fixed as perfect as before.
Thank you so much for dropping by, Svetlana.

[Sami Khalil]

Frailty and fragility are part and parcel of life. We have to be real careful breaking things and hearts too...A wonderful write...:)......................

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...Any time...:)...........................

[Eddie Davis]

A simple poem, but it does say a lot about the frailty of people. Glass doesn't bend much, it simply breaks as once it is molded by a glass-blower it holds that form.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Eddie.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A great metaphor for human emotions, your words are simple but powerful.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, cowboy!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure hon.

[ms. barrie]

Beautiful, poem...Very relatable. Written with elegant poignancy
...amazingly penned, Dhaye :) -- I also enjoy
The text format...i feel it adds impact. Thank you for sharing :))

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for the compliment, BJ. It was just a simple scribble based on the pics. Glad you like it.

[ms. barrie]

You welcome, Dhaye :)