NEVER GIVE UP

never ever

Never Give Up

To the child who wore a wrinkled dress during an election
who's been a funny candidate, and for that she never won

To the boy who always live in so much harshness and fears
from the people closest to him who always give him tears

To the girl who always sing beautifully at the start
but at the middle she would cry because her life was torn apart

To the lad who simply wrote songs but never kept them for himself
instead gave them to someone else rather than to keep on a shelf

To the lady who chose to love someone who seemed thoughtful and caring
only to find that she was deceived by fake sweetness in the beginning

To the man who felt in love but was broken at early stage
yet he forgave though he was left sad inside that cage

To the wife who forgot her name and just depend on a story
that she shouldn't hear any word but a chain of big sorry

To the husband who tried many times to love and trust
only to end up crying and memories would turn to dust

To the woman who fell in love but cannot move on from the past
a lot of worries inside her heart if she is really happy at last

To the man who tried once more after a thousand of falling
moving on with someone whom he feel now deserving

To them who always cry and just trying to be happy
I will tell them not to give up trying to change their story

To anyone who was a victim of so much anguish and pain
NEVER GIVE UP, have faith, not fear, just learn to dance in the rain!

Author's Note

I will tell them...

Reviews

[DIVYA]

My heart goes out to children who have their hearts broken. This is the saddest part. This is writing full of much compassion and motivation to those who have been let down in some way, by life. You have a lot of empathy for fellow humans and can feel their suffering and hurt as if your own. This writing reflects just that. Thanks for sharing Dhaye.

[W R Stowe]

Outright fantastic Dhaye never give up Fear is paralyzing and prevents from moving forward nice how you explored every avenue

Bill

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Bill.

[W R Stowe]

your welcome

[Don't just B, but B ama..]

NEVER GIVE UP, WOW that is my motto, LOVE it, i write that in almost every review I do. Wonderful poem, well written, and oh so true. Amazing work, thank you for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

"To anyone who was a victim of so much anguish and pain
NEVER GIVE UP, have faith, not fear, just learn to dance in the rain!"
Powerful and hopeful words dear Poet. I agree with your logic and your wisdom. Always a pleasure to read your thoughts and poetry dear Poet.
Coyote

[Sami Khalil]

A very inspiring and uplifting couplets calling on all to never give up and find hope in hopeless situations. Glad to read you today...Bravo..................

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for dropping by, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..........................

[gabrielle]

Every couplet is concise yet so full of story. The rhyme scheme is very consistent. i think this is one of your trademark, Dhaye. To encourage/motivate others is one of the purpose of our existence. Keep on inspiring/motivating others. :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks so much, Gab. For me, you are an inspiring person, too.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

We all have trills and tribulations but we can always find the light if we let our faith light the way,,, a very spiritually inspiring piece of writing.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts, Sir!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

The pleasure was mine.

[Eddie Davis]

Your poem is a needed voice of encouragement to a world that is hurting and weary. Great job.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much, Eddie.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

victims can reverse their fortunes with hope and resolve...they can change their story...

i have a friend in this situation...for too many years...i am still waiting for her to make that move...she keeps saying she will....
i hope she never gives up.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Sometimes people in this situation only need motivation from others because if none, they will only think it is their destiny and their story couldn't be changed...
Thank you, Sir.