IF

IF

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
"

...I have to...I will!

"



© 2014 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
A scribble before I go to school :)

My Review

Would you like to review this Chapter?
Login | Register




Featured Review

We should be willing to take a chance and risk everything and should not be afraid to make mistakes . The ocean is a vast place . We can be lost and wander around even with our full sail . Its the anchor that held us in our fiercest storm . Its the anchor that keeps our hopes steadfast and immovalble .

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

A short yet sweet prayer of love and endurance. Your message comes through so well....Much appreciated Dhaye.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We should be willing to take a chance and risk everything and should not be afraid to make mistakes . The ocean is a vast place . We can be lost and wander around even with our full sail . Its the anchor that held us in our fiercest storm . Its the anchor that keeps our hopes steadfast and immovalble .

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thats a great writing!! i love the way it short and to the point. love the way the love will be your coat that's strong. "nice scribble" =P

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You said so much in the short poem. Your words filled with hope and the hunger to feel the embrace of love. Thank you dear Poet for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
Pax
very romantic scribble, pretty friend.

peace of mind, I just wish I have those, napaka-crowded yung utak ko at times, kaya badly needed ang peace of mind na yan, someday I'll achieved it, someday....

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

9 Years Ago

Of course, Pax...someday.
Thanks, bro.
This is beautifully written thoughts, dhaye. Having a peace of mind is something that all of us long to have.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Gab.
beautiful...."let your love be my coat"

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Sir.
Some very lovely sentiments and full of promise and anticipation. Excellent...:)...............

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Sami.
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).......

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

367 Views
8 Reviews
Rating
Added on November 18, 2014
Last Updated on December 30, 2014
Tags: peace, love, hope, you, rain, ocean, coat


Author

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Philippines



About
Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Time Time

A Poem by Natehy


Just like... Just like...

A Poem by Blue