Another Rainy Day

getting dark again...

I thought the storm was over
And the sun now shines on me
Why the sky is dark again?
Still, I am not free

I beg You, I pray
Why I have this kind of heart?
It is easy to be broken
My life was torn apart

This pain, these tears
Won't they  just stay away?
I did my best to be humane
Do I deserve to be this way?

Another rainy day here
So heavy downpour I see
Not the rain that I've learned to love
I don't know how it came to me

I am so tired, I am so weak
I don't know if I can stand still
The last string of hope in me
Has weakened and took my will

My God, help me to understand
I still don't know how and why
My life, my heart's now broken
Oh, rainy day, this is my cry!

Author's Note

Musing from sadness...

*image from flickr.com

Reviews

[DIVYA]

You have made a superb correlation between rain and despair Dhaye. I could literally feel the grey and blue colors. It's always sad when a good soul is made to feel pain. A pain very palpable in this poem. My compliments on this well composed writing! 🍫

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much, dear Divya. You always give compliment to others. You are such a good soul, too.
You words are motivating that I really appreciate. Have a nice day!

[DIVYA]

You are welcome Dhaye. I hope you are having a great weekend. 🌸

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Dhaye, a mournful rainy day
will cleanse our soul and calm our
fears, with irredescent tears ☔️ truly, Pat

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, Patricia.

[Coyote Poetry]

The rainy days sadness come often.
"My God, help me to understand
I still don't know how and why
My life, my heart's now broken
Oh, rainy day, this is my cry!"
Old wise saying. "After the rain, the sun will shine again." I believe the bad days make the good days sweeter. Thank you dear friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

"Bad days make the good days sweeter"...nice line. Maybe you are right. I wish...
Thanks for spending your time on my pages.

[Coyote Poetry]

I have missed reading your work. I have been working too hard. I hope you are having fun and doing well.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Working too hard also...for our economy. Lol
Being here is having fun. Thanks again.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[gabrielle]

Rainy days make the earth more productive. :) But as humans it is not all the time that we can handle gracefully the trials and challenges thrown at us. Well done dhaye

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

That's true. Every human aspect has limitation...
Thank you so much, Gab.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Just awesome, an excellent write, I can feel this poem

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, hardeep. :)

[ms. barrie]

you're an amazingly talented poetess, Dhaye...a stunning write
that weaves exquisite imagery of stormy melancholy...with
sweet lyrical fluidity. I thank you for sharing your poetic gift
with us all.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I am so flattered by that "amazingly talented poetess" , dear B. I really appreciate your comments. I understand that "beauty is in the eye of beholder" and depending on how appreciative a person is. I am really thankful that while to my own eyes and to others, I am just a simple writer or just a beginner, you see me as someone like that. I am so grateful of that. You are one of those who motivate me to write.
Thank you again. Have a nice day!

[ms. barrie]

wow you're very welcome, Dhaye...and I thank you as well!
always a pleasure to read your writes...there is a sweet softness, sincerity
(even in your darker writes); that whisper of lessons that tends (I feel)
to be your style..as pleasing lyrical flow. (: - xx.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a very sad piece indeed...i feel that "days" might be singular "day"---

but the melancholy pours from this poem like a steady rain.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, sir. I always appreciate and accept your suggestion. :)

[Pax]

it is indeed easy to be broken, because we have fragile hearts, despite how thick our glass maybe.. on some point there's just to much... ganun talaga diba.. :) musing in the rain ka naman... hehe

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much, Pax.