A Fairytale <3.

I wrote this for my ex-boyfriend (who is now my current boyfriend) the first time we dated. Kind of cutesy, :).

If ever there's a day I'm without you,

Or ever there's a day I'm not near

Here is your token, a ticket to me

If you read it the answer is clear

If you pack up a sunset into a box,

And then maybe throw in some stars

You'll find out that when you open it up

I'm pretty close to where you are.

If there's ever a day that you're doubtful

If there's ever a day that you're down

You can call upon me for a shoulder

And I promise that I'll always be around

If you ever are startled by something,

And you cannot believe what you've found

If you need me, babe, I swear it to you,

I will never, not once, let you down

And I know that sometimes people jump

And have not a clue where they'll fall

I can promise you that you'll land in my arms

And I'll build around us a stone wall

And from there on we'll make a castle,

And be the Queen and the King of them all

We can stay in our world of make believe,

All you have to do is make the call

We can live a life like a fairytale,

And it would only have to be me and you

I wouldn't ever need anyone else,

No one to tell us what to say or to do

Because you're the only thing my eye's on

When we walk into a crowded room

You're the only thing that makes me happy,

Yet something tells me you have no clue

If the world were to end today suddenly,

I wouldn't want to be with anyone else

I wouldn't want any other man,

Nothing of more beauty or wealth

'Cause when I fall asleep every night, 

I always want to see your smiling face

And when I wake up the next morning

I love to see you lying there, still in place

There truly isn't anything better

Than waking up with you in my arms

And feeling like at that one moment

Not one thing could do me any harm

And when it all comes down to everything,

All the cute, little things that you do

I could never truly put into words

How much I mean every " I love you."

'Cause some people they say it careless,

And some people they say it too much

But I can feel it, deep down, in the pit my heart,

How it beats every time that we touch

And in our little land of a fairytale,

There is never too many of those

There's never enough, & never too much,

It's something that everyone knows

Just a kiss will spark thousands of fireworks,

And when I hold you stars shoot past the sky

When I'm near you, magic is aways around

When we're together, I swear I can fly

And when I dream, I dream of the future

And you'd never guess what it is that I see

I see a big castle, built out of stone

And a King there fit perfect for me

Author's Note

I fixed SOME of it, but there still are errors. I don't like how some of it flows, but oh well!

Reviews

[Demetria.Ro$e.Hathaway]

what a beautiful poem
well done
Your Friend Demi

[KIMBERLY]

very nice:) very well written from the heart:)keep it up!God Bless!