Haiku Suite

Haiku Suite

A Poem by heavenscentgirl1

sunshine filters in
robins share their happy songs
greatness all around


sunshine warms the earth
mourning doves meandering
squirrels run about


raindrops fall to earth
flora proudly standing tall
nature is renewed

© 2017 heavenscentgirl1


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A lovely haiku string my friend, just one little point if i may ...the alliteration between "mourning" and "meandering" is wonderful but using "ing" twice in such a small line is not very good in any kind of form.Maybe "mourning doves meander free" ? ,just a suggestion:)


Posted 6 Years Ago


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heavenscentgirl1

6 Years Ago

Thanks for taking time to review this one Stella ~ I truly do appreciate it my friend.

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A poem full of wonderful imagery that lets the reader see the true beauty as they read!

Posted 2 Years Ago


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What a beautiful haiku with wonderful imagery you shared! I love nature but can't write as beautifully as you or others write here.Very pleasing to read...

Posted 2 Years Ago


heavenscentgirl1

2 Years Ago

THANK YOU SO MUCH SIMA , I APPRECIATE THE KIND WORDS IN REVIEW. HSG 😇
I really enjoyed these well-done Haikus....

the one form I enjoy writing myself.
thank you for these,
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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heavenscentgirl1

2 Years Ago

THANK YOU JACOB, YOUR REVIEW IS VERY MUCH APPRECIATED. HSG 😇
real simple, yet sweet enough to read over

Posted 2 Years Ago


heavenscentgirl1

2 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read and leave such kind comments, they are very much appreciated ... read more
dear Mary Jo... pleasant birds and special flowers are part of our heritage.., a group of Haiku lifts me up and away to a gorgeous day.
truly, Pat

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

heavenscentgirl1

3 Years Ago

Pat, Thanks for taking the time to read and leave your kind words on this piece. I truly appreciate.. read more
I ADORE haikus. Very simple. Very lovely. Great read.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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heavenscentgirl1

3 Years Ago

Thank You Laurie Rose ~ I’m glad that you enjoyed this older piece that I had posted. I’m sorry.. read more
I must admit I am quite fond of the haiku and senryu form. I've never presented multiple verses though. Love the nature appeal to this.

Welcome to the WC!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

heavenscentgirl1

6 Years Ago

Kelly, thanks so much for the visit & kind words in review of this little Haiku Suite. Writing abou.. read more
Well spoken and reasoned Haiku...

Posted 6 Years Ago


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heavenscentgirl1

6 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing another of my postings Chris ~ it is very much appreciated.

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Gee
A celebration of nature in your three well penned Haikus ( Haiku ??)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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heavenscentgirl1

6 Years Ago

Thank you Gee for the kind words in review of this posting ~ they are very much appreciated.
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I've always liked nature poems so this was easy to read and like. The images are clear.

Nice job on this. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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heavenscentgirl1

6 Years Ago

Relic, thank you for reading another of my limited offerings here on WC ~ it is very much appreciate.. read more

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