Haiku Suite

Haiku Suite

A Poem by heavenscentgirl1


sunshine filters in
robins share their happy songs
greatness all around


sunshine warms the earth
mourning doves meandering
squirrels run about


raindrops fall to earth
flora proudly standing tall
nature is renewed

© 2017 heavenscentgirl1



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A lovely haiku string my friend, just one little point if i may ...the alliteration between "mourning" and "meandering" is wonderful but using "ing" twice in such a small line is not very good in any kind of form.Maybe "mourning doves meander free" ? ,just a suggestion:)


Posted 6 Months Ago


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Love haiku - so this suite filled me with joy upon reading (x3)! Great use of connected subject matter! :-)

Posted 6 Months Ago


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heavenscentgirl1

6 Months Ago

Phill, thanks so much for stopping by for a visit and it truly warms my heart to hear that this Ha.. read more
They all are pleasing to the mind's eye dear poet.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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heavenscentgirl1

6 Months Ago

Tony, its a pleasure to have you visit my page and leave your words in review. Thank you very much.. read more
Your choice of words gives a beauty to the breaking day. Meandering fits perfectly. A perfect haiku set.
Well done, Hsg!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

heavenscentgirl1

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your continued support my friend. It means a lot to me to receive your words .. read more

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