FOUR SEASONS OF MY LOVE

 

 

 

I want to remember Winter's wonderland

When you plucked the moon from the sky and turned

stars into gemstones to warm my wanting heart

before the snow storms came and took them away ~

 

~

 

I want to remember Autumn's vibrant

coloured moments

your azure eyes lighting mine

with tears of happiness that turned to sadness ~

 

~

 

I want to remember Summer's

heat of searing passion,

 to savour that feeling before my heart

shatters like a billion little stars ~

 

~

 

I want to remember Springtime

before blossoms renewal and promises

were cut short by April showers...

turing my world into a lonely, lost

wilderness ~ 

 

 

~ 

 

 

(c) Helena 2008

 

Author's Note

THANK YOU FOR READING MY WORDS

Reviews

[Antony]

Fantastic, each season brings beautiful memories of a loved one, an emotional ride with loss after each season, do you think the change in seasons hinder our progress, does the mind change its approach toward love as the seasons change? it seems to be that way quite often. You have given the reader some thought provoking scenarios, a vivid picture, but it made me think. These lines stand out the best for me.


I want to remember Autumn's vibrant
coloured moments
your azure eyes lighting mine
with tears of happiness that turned to sadness ~
Antony



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[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Sooo beautiful! Well Penned

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the Garden-Tryst contest! If I had been the judge, this poem would have been right up there in the top three.

[Ocean Orchid]

How wonderfully u played through metaphoric expressions to describe seasons in this poem, good job ..

[Tony Hwilka]

Such a beautiful arrangement of words.