~ CASTLE OF DREAMS ~

Just a little fairytale from my muse!

 

 

 

 

CASTLE OF DREAMS

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We built our castle of dreams with bricks of love

A sacred shrine for night time trysts…..

A rainbow drawbridge over a moat

Of crystal pools shimmering amethyst starlight ~

We danced into our cocooned world
Protected in each others arms ~
 
Enclosed safely in dreams
Two lovers weaving gold and
Silver threads of forevermore ~




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(C) Helena 2008
					

				

Author's Note

Written for the Albert's Poetry Group Word Forum inspired by Gordon's word "enclosed"
THANK YOU FOR READING MY WORDS

Reviews

[Chaos Stone]

fantastic fanciful fantasy
great metaphor
'A sacred shrine for night time trysts'
loved it

you should let me rate it 100

[angelina neves]

congratulation for the deserved winning! :)

[poet2angels (lynda)]

This is gorgeous
Beautifully written...I love castles so this was a lovely piece to read...
I love the ending:

"Two lovers weaving gold and
Silver threads of forevermore ~"

TY for entering!

Lynda

[Wondering Mind]

Beautiful imagery and wonderful wordcraft.

[JohnL]

Lovely images and metaphors:

'Enclosed safely in dreams
Two lovers weaving gold and
Silver threads of forevermore ~'

What a fine way to 'weave' in the magic word and how much better 'Silver threads of forevermore' sounds than 'They all lived happily ever after'.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Now that was a fairytale that dreams are made of. Good, no Great poem!

I came back a second time to let you know the section that warmed my heart


We built our castle of dreams with bricks of love

A sacred shrine for night time trysts�..


Our homes are our castles and we build them with love or decorate them with love. This is our safe haven. Our Castle of dreams

[darkgurl]

This is wonderful and written so well....Kim (AKA Kit Kat)

[Arsalan...]

this is amazing...

[Aspiring Angel]

I loved this all the way around! Your imagery beautiful as you brought this before us so delicately. It has a calming sense to it that true love is still possible if just searched for.

I am so sorry I am just finding the time to visit you here. I guess I STILL live my life on the fly.

Nice to find this poetry home. I will look forward to our visits.

Blessings,
Lesa

[Gordon]

I really liked this piece. It was so fantastical (if that's a word). It kept me longing for the story to continue even though they lived happily ever after. I wanted to relax, kick my shoes off, and have a cup of tea in that kind of happiness. Your poem and Eb's were read many times as I tried to decide on a winner. In the end Sal's caught my fancy just a bit more but yours is still a winner. Thanks for playing along.