DANCING ON DREAM'S STAIRWAY

DANCING ON DREAM'S STAIRWAY

A Poem by Helena
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Inspired by Tovli's Ten Contest with the underlined phrases included as per the rules. (60 words in all)

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 I will dance to the moon field on dream stairways

all the way singing of the first time I met you...

Memories surface like small mud springs again

blushing hot like my cheeks...

What do you see I say as I jump up to make tea

Do you remember the time we...

But you simply sleep oblivious of my ramblings

 

 

 

(c) Helena May 2009

 


© 2009 Helena



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can you believe, I just found this? This is so beautiful--how I wish it could have been "judged" with the others.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is excellent, What I see so clearly is someone day dreaming of precious moments experienced and wanting to talk about them with that person you shared them with, so long ago, it seems as though you will share your thoughts alone, this night. Very well writtten piece.

Tony

Posted 8 Years Ago


really well done again with the required words for the contest you mention. naturally done and brilliant effct!

Posted 8 Years Ago


A very sweet atmospheric feel to this piece... it gives a wonderful chill down the spine.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful dance with the words given! Beautiful idea!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good entry. Well written

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful euphoric piece. A truly wonderful poem with captivating imagery. The picture is beautiful as well.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Helena
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