Hold my belt

I woke up to a thought of you.
Crisp an clear like an autumn day.
I've sank into you.
An endless dream of serenity.
I don't think of us fighting up hill.
I wonder of us fighting all the way.
You light my night.
Gas lights and subtle kisses.
Scratch my back.
Tell me the same stories.
Time and again.
I'll always love you.
I'll sing while you drive babe.

Author's Note

Ignore everything. Very rough draft.

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Scott... a unique style of poetry...
I met my husband at Bronco Billy's country western club. After dancing a number of nights, he asked me while dancing to a slow song, to hold the back of his Belt. We have been slow dancing all these years. truly, Pat

[Alexa Apothic Red]

This is lovely, wistful, flowing... a questioning of what exists and the future. It definitely implies the comfort of a familiar and intimate love.. one in which partners have the intuition to just go along together and sense the rhythm of things without even speaking. This is beautiful!

[KWP]

i love the last line :) what a great write ... simple and yet layers of the kind of love everyone knows is everlasting ... love it X

[Delmar Cooper]

I ignored everything, as instructed. Now what?

[sette]

it is such a romantic poem, i like the title too, it makes me visualize having a road trip with someone you love dearly.