Rain

Rain

A Poem by Nicole

You look up at the sky

You know it hasn't rained in 4 weeks

You hope it just rains

Right on you

You don't care

As long as it lasts for more than 3 minutes

You don't care

You look up again

"It won't work" you think

Just as you start to walk away

You see the ground getting covered in... in

Black spots....

You look up

It's raining!

It's actually raining!

 

 

 

Just remember.... mericals do happen.

 

© 2009 Nicole


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mericals---miracles

Posted 14 Years Ago


the best

Posted 14 Years Ago


i like it, now i want it to rain!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like it. Made me smile. Did you write it in blue to support the subject matter--rain?

Posted 14 Years Ago


haha, i love it Nic! Nice work. Did u read any of mine yet?? sorry, i'm a bit excited. talk to ya later.
--Bells

Posted 14 Years Ago



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