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I wrote this for a contest. Hope you like it!

              Love

It's a magical thing.

You don't have to be wealthy to get it.

         Being Poor

It's very hard to live like that.

We all wish people could help.

            Helping

It is nice to help someone.

 

 

We could help the poor.

And we don't have to be wealthy to get love

 

Just keep this poem in your head. You'll know why...

Author's Note

Thank you for reading this. Tell me all of my mistakes and please also tell me how to inprove my writing, Thanks!

Reviews

[deeps]

Such a wonderful write I like this.
Well expressed as well.

[Marlena]

I like this, nifty format ^^ It seems to read better if you make the words pop out like that, and I didn't find any mistakes :)

[Closed Account]

wow, i like it nic! good job!
--Bells