Life

We are all afraid of things.

And most of the time,

we're afraid to show it.

But, it's okay.

To say that you're afraid.

Some of us are afraid of death,

the future,

love,

bugs,

the dark,

fire,

getting hurt,

or being alone.

 

Sometimes,

we're afraid for others.

If they go someplace far away,

they might not come back.

Or,

if they are very sick or have a very bad illness,

they may not make it.

 

It's sad.

It's life.

Life is unfair.

Life is good.

Life is scary.

And, life is exiting.

 

But, that's life.

We all have to live with it.

Author's Note

Tell me all my mistakes. And please tell me how to inprove my writing. I know it needs something. If you can figure it out, please tell me. Thank you for reading and reviewing all of my previous writing. :)

Reviews

[Closed Account]

i like this! you've put the essence of life into an excellent poem. I enjoyed reading this. great job! =)
--Bells =)

[Last Lying Look]

I really like this.
You've captured the essence of life perfectly.
Excellent write!
I look forward to reading more from you.
-Elissa :)