Havnt thought of a title yet

She sits and waits

the pain is unbearable

she sees her love

she doesnt understand

everything was okay

until yesterday

she became his prey

she doesnt cry the tears

but she feels the pain

her soul begins to drain

he has left

gone for good

thats not what she wanted

he found someone new

he loves her now

she is a faint memory

she fades into oblivion

he stole her heart

her soul

her passion

she cant get it back

it is disaster

why did she trust him

why did she love him

he said he'd never leave

but now she sits

and he is gone

he left her there

alone in the dark

scared and hurt

forever scarred by his heart

now she feels like ice

she's slowly fading

she screams

she is lifted

she looks in her saviors eyes

they are warm

he holds her close

she feels warm

she no longer feels pain

all she feels is new love

he swears to never leave

this promise is true

they both know it

they both live it.......

Author's Note

i duno. i just thought of it

Reviews

[^_^KiTTeN^_^]

very deep. i like it. you have true talent. i think you'll keep writing for a very long time...or at least i hope you do.

[Lady of the Ring]

sounds like what i'm goin through