Kiss Me Caramel

Awww....

Kiss me caramel

Then let's go round again

The touching making carnival lights

Take on fairy tale hues, bigger in the background

Releasing my expectations in heavy chested sighs

Let's go round again

Kiss me caramel

Author's Note

That damnable ferris wheel, not a lot of pregnancies because of it, but maybe a few cases of mono....

Reviews

[Neville]

This is so darned sweet I need to go check my blood sugars all over.. seriously

[I Am Svetlana]

I believe that some people's kisses are able to be addictive. That may sound odd, but I feel it is true. Any type of love, I believe, is a carousel in and of itself. It's all a cycle, whether it ends up good or bad. This is a beautifully written piece. I feel mainly the title lured me in, but it was a wonderful expression of thoughts.

[Crowley]

Thank you again...this title came to me when we were out one night and I met a girl named Caramel. I thought it an unusually delicious name...lol.

[Zhavy]

Really like this, seems simple but yet so much complexity in interpretation. I really enjoyed this.

[Crowley]

Thanks so much, I appreciate the read and the kind words and thanks for frowning me!

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

The Carnival lights with fairy tale hues rock the poem, setting the pace for an exhilarating, exuberant kind of love making. The title of the poem adds sweetness and a lovely stickiness to the ride! I have always been fascinated by carnivals and the amorous air to them. Loved it Crowley!

[Chris Shaw]

I was never a fan of ferris wheels. They make me feel giddy, and that's just looking at them. Caramel though, yes please particularly if it's salted caramel. Can't say no to that Crowley.

Chris

[-Batata]

When I read "kiss me caramel" I thought it was some kind of endearment 😂 What a way to portray it !

[Crowley]

LOL...just a memory of the ferris wheel and a girl when young, her name wasn't caramel but that just sounded more delicious!!! Thanks!!!

[Kelly Scheppers]

I'm a fool for caramel, I've gotta say! I already bought two bags of Halloween candy...you guessed it! I love the play and passion you've put into this!

[Crowley]

Meeeeee….tooo. thanks Kelley and don't eat too much candy, you'll spoil your supper.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I always buy Halloween candy that I like, for nine out of ten times, I'm stuck with it. On average, I get anywhere from 0 to 3 kids on Halloween night. The year I buy nothing is the year I'll get a mess of trick or treaters, right? I can always make caramel apples! ; )

[Crowley]

mmmmm...caramel apples. We don't at our house either so we go over to our friends sip cocktails and hand out candy to kids they seem to bus in from other areas. They live in a historical area in phoenix so it gives and old school feel to it.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I think your a lil hungry Cee...conversations can do that!lol

[Crowley]

Especially those conversations....lol. Thanks Q!!!

[Ardra]

Sounds like a chill beverage you can find in the coffee shop that would take you to the door steps of heaven...

A fairy tale mochaccino :)

[Crowley]

Sorry so long to respond....I like Fairy Tale Mochaccino, sounds heavenly!!! Thanks!!!