Come Sunday

A little season themed diddy...

The winter cold, waiting on snow

But mistletoe, mistletoe

Gives promise of warmth, slippery kisses

When Sunday comes, please don't go

 

Your wet hair curls, the streetlight glow

But mistletoe, mistletoe

My tongue on your teeth, intimate wishes

When Sunday comes, please don't go

 

Icicles hang, Decembers show

But mistletoe, mistletoe

Your icy breath steams, my heart it misses

When Sunday comes, please don't go

Author's Note

Happy start to the holidays everyone!

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

An endearing little write Crowley. Nothing like a bit of mistletoe to add a bit of warmth to the cold weather. Promises of kisses, lovely. Happy New Year's Day to you and yours.

Chris

[Jade]

I love this, such a cute little fun write. Awesome write

[Crowley]

A little bit of cheese for the Christmas platter. But I do remember standing in the cold in high school with a girl I should not have been with Kissing until our toes were frozen solid...awww...heavy sigh!!

[Jade]

I got went ice skating with a boy once and he kept trying to hold me up cause I kept falling down, He went and twirled me around and my ice skate flew off in mid air and came down and hit him in the head. We laughed for hours...This write for some reason brought back that memory.

[Crowley]

Lol...that is a good memory!!! Geez, I haven't ice skated in years, but I can see how that could happen.

[Jade]

that's the thing I don't know how to ice skate, but this guy could talk me into anything...LOL

[Neville]

a very special little diddy if I may be so bold... very visual, almost made me shiver with delight....

[Crowley]

I can get a little flighty with my writing every now and again...lol. Thanks Neville!

[Neville]

no doubt about it.. and my pleasure sir..

[Samuel Dickens]

Your mind works like mine--well, the younger me's mind, turning Christmastime into an opportunity for romance. I don't know about you, but I could never get enough of those "beneath the mistletoe" kisses.

[Crowley]

Haaa!!! Yeah, memories of standing in the cold and kissing a girl that I really wasn't supposed to be kissing...my toes were so frozen...lol

[lightsong]

beautiful, intimate, promising, dreamy, so loving tender and passionate, I love this from You my friend, I'm sorry I've missed it when it was first posted, but it's still brilliantly glowing...

[Crowley]

Thank you, I love the feeling that Christmas brings.

[angel]

And to you!
What a sweet, sad poem.
I like the phrase:"My tongue on your teeth"--unusual, but so evocative.

[Crowley]

I like those little things that we forget about...we remember the kissing itself, the use of the tongue, but maybe not so much that smooth porcelain feeling of the teeth adding texture to the moment..lol!!! Thanks for the read Angel!

[angel]

In future years, I look forward to seeing how you describe the kissing with a partner who is toothless...

[Crowley]

Haaaaa!!!!!! Those would be perfect for different kisses....lol.

[Ramneet Kaur]

Beautiful poem. Loved reading it. It reflects the warmth of winter very well.

[Crowley]

Thanks so much, your review is much appreciated!!

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I don"t know why...but I get an image of Shirley Temple signing with this lil ditty!

[Crowley]

...in the background of a Stephen King movie...lol. thanks Q!

[Ryan K. M.]

I too wish Sundays would never end lol. This brings to mind a lot of times I've spent with loved ones on the holidays that have made everything else in the background fade and good feelings become more prominent.

[Crowley]

Thanks man!!! I appreciate the visit!