Day Tripper

Its all downhill from here...

Tilted and full of grace like a sandstone boulder

She entered my eye and I bathed in synaptic beauty

Her march south was supposed to stop in the heartland

A life would be built and beauty created from thin air

But the brakes failed, a downward spiral past heart and intuition

Only to lodge squarely in the valley of pleasure and infatuation

A man’s aura dies and what is left is post coital breathing

Reviews

[Beccy]

Ah yes those little electrical impulses, billions of them, too many choices really, which why so many day trips turn out not to be as idyllic as one might wish.

Downhill or Uphill, it matters not, we cannot help but hitch that ride. :))

Beccy.

[Crowley]

You have the right of it, and what a fun ride it can be! thanks Beccy, great to see you!

[Onlyme]

Oh! lala, hot, sexy and sensual, out pouring of arousing words and actions that sure does slip of the lips easily.

[Crowley]

lol...sometimes it moves fast. Thanks Dawn!!

[Saoirse K.]

a quick trip into the sensual
spun out on lust and pure pleasure
perhaps requiring a future fix
another hit of dopamine
plz
good write

[Crowley]

Sometimes it just goes that way...and its not always bad.

[Saoirse K.]

true enough

[NotUsinganymore]

Very interesting use of words. I enjoyed it!

[Crowley]

Thanks Jung!!!

[Neville]

It happens just take my word for it... you will over come, after all, tis just one more obstacle along the way to eventual enlightenment... go find another sand stone boulder, stare at it for 40 odd years and let me know how ya feel afterwards... in the meantime, if ya cant sneak out, just feign dead till she leaves for work.... it always works for me and they dont call me Rocky for nothing :)

[Crowley]

Maybe the sandstone boulder was you...lol. Thanks my friend! I would rename you Sandy!

[Neville]

Hey, that's a sore point if ever there was.. a sandy sore sure point :)

[Chris Shaw]

Day Tripper, Beatles song, love them. This journey didn't quite go to plan Crowley. You ended up much further south than you intended. Sometimes it just happens that way. You learn by your mistakes, usually she says. Relationships eh?

Chris

[Crowley]

What can you do...lol!! Its a crazy business, take your time is probably the first line in the instruction manual, but I couldn't find mine!! Thanks Christine!!

[Chris Shaw]

You know the old saying, act in haste, repent at leisure :)) You won't need an instruction manual if there's a next time lol.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"Sunday driver, yes...it took me so long to find out, but i found out"

yes pleasure and infatuation, short lived auras...and then what...the crash...
heart's car demolished...to the scrap heap...

[Crowley]

Make it five...you were on a roll yesterday!!! I just hope to become something better when the recyclers get done with me! Thanks again Jacob!!