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I hope you never wanted love

I hope you never wanted love

A Poem by Plagued Monumentally

Through the shadowy trees of the midnight hour,
I can see you through the crooked and cracked branches,
Your glowing yellow eyes pierce deep in my soul,
Your fangs made of your lovers neck bares its existence.

"I want them to hear you scream." 
"Or we can come out of this one the same team."

Your skin that looks like its made out of paper,
Your ego that is the size of two twin towers,
Your melancholy eccentrics and your apathetic demeanor.

"Bring me fire, bring me ice, bring me blood."
"But I'll be careful not to drown you in a flood."

You are the reason why my existence is afraid of you.

© 2011 Plagued Monumentally


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Oddly transcendent in your use of lurid descriptives. I thoroughly delighted in your use of an ancient nocturnal terror for effect. Exceptional!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wonderfully descriptive and yet menacing. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Heavy, dark, brooding, scary even.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This could possibly be about an emotional vampire. We can allow them to suck every bit of our feelings from us...........we need be very afraid and steer clear. Wonderful piece!


Posted 12 Years Ago


very haunting... i cant get rid of the feeling i got when i read it, great job, im in love with the 1st and 2nd lines

Posted 12 Years Ago


Stunning piece! I loved it!! Its so good.. full of haunting feelings. Very well written. I enjoyed reading it. This piece is unique and just fascinating. It captures the reader's attention once you begin to read. Just wonderful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


"I want them to hear you scream."
"Or we can come out of this one the same team."

"Bring me fire, bring me ice, bring me blood."
"But I'll be careful not to drown you in a flood."

I think everyone said it right when it ties everything together and that it was dark and a classic.You express things so easily!!!! Teach me your ways lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the title, it really ties the whole poem together.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Really intriguing poem, dark and quite enjoyable to read.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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