Heart on my Sleeve

Heart on my Sleeve

A Poem by Kasey Nichole

As I watched the headlights pull away,
I begged and pleaded for you to stay.

My heart began to crack and break,
All of my innocence you did take. 

Tears clouded my blurry eyes,
While rain fell from the tortured skies.

You waved goodbye and I waved back,
Two years of my life you threw off track.

Now I am left here in the rain,
Alone and drenched from all the pain.

So, as I watched the headlights leave,
I no longer wore my heart on my sleeve.



© 2017 Kasey Nichole



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I love how you concluded your poem by connecting the first stanza to the last one
Gives a nice organised complete feel to it
Other than that i love the emotions here.....great poem
One could draw alot of analogies from it

Posted 4 Months Ago


something about rain and pain you know? What a tragedy, life is a mess, it sucks, what are we gonna do???

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful and really impressive write up dear! I got goosebumps, while reading it. Way simple and way expressive.

Cheers!
Singh.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Ben
Love this! poignant :)
B x

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A sad poem but a very true one to so many of us:)

Posted 8 Months Ago



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Kasey Nichole
Kasey Nichole

Sanibel Island , FL



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Well, i'm 19 years old and I have wanted to become a writer ever since I could hold a pencil in my hand. I really hope you enjoy reading my writings! Feel free to leave comments and let me know what .. more..

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