Save Me

Toli's contest

Flames within my head

transforms my brain

meter by meter to ashes

 

My mind screams

water -- cold water

please Lord pull me free

 

Away from these flames.

Away from these lifted arms.

linked together, these numberless

feet treading so close.

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

A very well worded piece and with such meaning. Loved this.

[Tovli]

a perfect use of the phrase, Tony. well done. tovli