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Reviews

[Elisa Laura]

Thank you Muse for bringing me back to the Vatican, and Rome for a while, and even in middle agaes, I loved the descriptive essence of this write. With a great, erotic wink in it. (Like those times really could be) You never chase to amaze me, The love of Latin hasn't needed an translation, the tongue spoke well... "drowning in the holy water" was for me the line, a rebirth, of all... with a wink... and " my heart is just a pulse that adorns your spirits smile" one to think about... I felt you were talking to a holy person. (for you) I admire this.... Wonderfully imagery. You must have read all Dan Brown's for sure. Amazing work....

E.L. xo

[Elisa Laura]

You did so well!! it is amazingly when some can reach such. You did a good job. The work the music, the graphic processing, everything. My truest compliments, keep on writing your talent!! :))

[Allen Smuckler]

I never considered myself a religious being...until now...and yet i'm still not sure who or what you're writing about..I feel the presence of the Lord while at the same time the image of a lover...
either way...a beautifully written tribute.
allen

[The Cobra Lounge]

Always so wonderful to hear from such a talented soul. x

[Allen Smuckler]

my pleasure...always
thank you for your kind words....
allen

[Pax]

beautifully compose poem along with the imagines from top to bottom forming a great art.

[PoppySilver]

To know connection can be so emotively branching and grounding is to feel spiritual indeed....have missed your writing love, this is stunning! Really glad I read you today, you have always hit the spot lol
So beautiful!
xoxo

[MELODY CARNEY aka Kimbe..]

To verbally convey with great fluid grace a captured moment of the souls emotions is both intensely difficult and rare. You have taken me there. I felt the moment your mind searched your soul for the emotions it wanted to convey. I love this is every way, you are a gift to every reader, the mental journey is the gift you share. Very few writers on here captivate my true intellect and emotions...you are one of them.

[The Cobra Lounge]

I'm so flattered you think I'm one of "them", well sweetie...so are you. xo

[afra]

awesome ...you are a great writer ....i love this one

[Yellow Butterfly]

I'm wordless (as well as speechless) for this exquisite piece...


Heavenly....


In awe..... :o)

[MOON]

Well this is lovely a tribute to someone who inspires , reads like a holy text to love . The opening lines particularly beautiful. Thanks for sending text , I can see picture which really complements the words .

[Steel]

Quite overwhelming in its intrinsic grandeur...wonderful work..!

[The Cobra Lounge]

:) No so dark any more my friend.

[Steel]

No, not so dark..:)

[sir joe]

Such a wonderful poem filled with adoration, love, and humility.
This has captured my heart probably because I can relate to the poetic persona. Perhaps we share the same faith.
Keep the fire burning. God sees our goodness and obedience of His commands. (=

[The Cobra Lounge]

I want my poetry to be personal...so thank you. :)

[sir joe]

You're very much welcome. (=

[caesarkreshen]

quiet and powerful. Nice flow.

If there were a few weaker parts, I think "a quiet worship" and "drowning in holy water."

Overall, good.

[The Cobra Lounge]

Inspiration is in the eyes of the beholder...both positive and negative criticism I openly embrace. Thank you.