Walking across water

Walking across water

A Poem by +she plays with matches+

 

 

 

 

 

You are a mortal with an immortal's soul

 

listening...        

 

 

to the platonic voices of reasoning

 

owning a conscience that filled you with clarity  

 

confident hands that divided the seasons

 

composing...       

 

words of symmetry and curiosity

 

revealing your awesome beauty and mystery    

 

your two feet barely touched the dirt of the earth

 

you preferred...       

 

to walk across water or walking on air

 

gravity seemed to move your energy elsewhere  

 

the cosmos gifted you with a gratis life

 

you knew not...       

 

how lucky you were and how lucky you was

 

to be weightless and do whatever just because

 

 

 

 


© 2014 +she plays with matches+



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This reminds me of someone so close to heart and then so out of reach. Almost like a lover never touched. Of course I relate everything to my life because I'm selfish that way lol... but honestly it touched that part of me, that waits on the other side.. with arms wrapped around my knees and simply silent...xo "breathe me"... sigh

Posted 4 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Lily Mae

4 Years Ago

That's what I loved about it. The clarity is there to cross and the fog doesn't seem to be forebodi.. read more
Lily Mae

4 Years Ago

Plus up above in the clouds the darkended area looks like two lovers..x
+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

I know where your mind it sweetie...I hope he will breathe the same air as you someday.



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Muse you are not only a true friend, however one of my favorite writers on WC. This was simply one classic poetry, which takes you in a peaceful world. Simply amazing!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nothing like "doing whatever just because"

i am so glad this poem revisited me...we had another cup of coffee and chatted about how talented you are, Muse.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

+she plays with matches+

3 Years Ago

I plan on "doing whatever just because" this weekend. lol
Your compliment was so sweet. Thank.. read more
Wow. This one just left me all goosebumpy, and teary. I immediately thought of someone special to me who died much too young ... In the faves. Thanks for the memory.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Wow I love it very peaceful and Elegant.


Thank you for sharing this Peacefully breathtaking piece
and thank you for your sweet review and comment.



I loved these stanza's lines.





to the platonic voices of reasoning





owning a conscience that filled you with clarity





confident hands that divided the seasons





composing...





words of symmetry and curiosity





revealing your awesome beauty and mystery





your two feet barely touched the dirt of the earth

WOW and the music went so beautifully with this piece
nice work.


Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

+she plays with matches+

3 Years Ago

Now you see...I'm not ALWAYS dark and morbid. I do have a soft side. Thank you, I hope it lifted you.. read more
Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

Never said you were dark and morbid LOL... I don't see your work like that Hone. You're quite welc.. read more
Oh, Muse, that is a masterpiece! Beautifully conceived and crafted, a true piece of art. The poet you were paying tribute to must have felt very honored. If I could rate it (which doesn't seem possible), I would give this poem a 100. And your graphic complements your words perfectly.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

thank you, I turned my ratings off for the most part, can't say why. But I am glad you enjoyed it.
Unbearable lightness of being.
Your words are lovely and intoxicating...


Rossen~

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful and refreshing. The music definitely helps. You are a true artist, Muse! Stay true to it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You expressed the traits of someone who's transcending to a higher level of enlightenment.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have molded so nicely that an amazing bridge developed for walking across water.
The image is awesome.Love how it vanishes to meet the mysterious world waiting at the other side.


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

thank you, I'm glad you understood the mystery of crossing the bridge to destiny.
zainul

4 Years Ago

I am very happy for being able to pass the exam.
Thank you great poet for the lovely work.:)

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