This time I could say I was truly inspired by both music and imagery. I wanted to see if I could spin off my own poem based on a famous song and some well-known lyrics. The reverberation of her voice made me feel like I was in a canyon surrounded by beautiful echoes...I tried to share this emotion the best I could, I hope you enjoy it as much as I do.
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And you have certainly achieved your goal.........the way you have formatted your gripping write is like that of an echo descending down the valley of desire while still so much on fire, but the fire being snuffed out little by little....AMAZING!! I love it!!! I am so often inspired by a video, or an image, or both so I can really relate to you wanting to create this piece!!!
A favorite of mine!!
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Glad you understood my vision Sheila...you are a master at presentation...so this is a major complim.. read moreGlad you understood my vision Sheila...you are a master at presentation...so this is a major compliment coming from you.
It seems that you've devised an very entertaining style of poetry. Passion shall never go out of fashion lest the human race goes into extinction. Passion is composed of three components: Bio-chemical , cultural, and mystical. The mystical component takes over as we get older and less affected by the other two components. Our reasoning ability moderates how far we take this natural bonding obsession. The brain of a young person isn't fully developed until they're 21 or 22 which means that their reasoning ability isn't at full capacity thus making them more prone to take passion to the extreme without moderation just as nature intended.
Woah. I know I won't be the first last, or only one to tell you how amazing you are. But you definitely deserve it every f*****g time! I was on other tabs, reviewing poetry by others serially. Then the music had me alarmed and it sounded like it'd be coming from you. So I clicked here and sure enough, it was you! You really are a true artist even if this was inspired by this song. You're a visionary. I have no clue how you made the fading things happen, though. This is just the perfect piece of art! I sat here reading it wide eyed, scrolling down to see what more you had done with this one poem. I've missed reading your work like this! Hope to see you coming online more often...
I feel so happy! New work from one of my very favorite poets! Thank you Cobra.
Love this BTW.
The format was a visual flame. The fading in and out was on target with the tone of the write as well. You're about the only person I think can pull off this visual art with your poetic art and not look cheesy doing it. flaming parts of words red also give the feeling that the fire is spreading, burning back to the root of the thought.
OK... The thought here was just like a flame. A familiar warm and depth to the emotion is felt. Yet, at the same time, I feel my pulse quicken at the warning this may get too hot. I know how it feels to burn and be consumed in this flame. It is a wonderful and terrible death. I guess in a sense, "no one can save me". Not even "you". Because in "you" I am transformed into something/someone else... Thus the fading out felt even more valid.
I cold read your work all day long! I read almost every work you posted in two days because you write with such a fearless power even when the write is about losing all power.
Oh, did I mention I loved the poem? Ha.
Great work Cobra!
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