Dear Lucifer

Dear Lucifer

A Poem by +she plays with matches+

 

 

 

 

 

I am well

 

"thank you"

 

 

You asked about the storm

All I can say is

 

 

Yes

 

 

 it still thunders...

 

 

I truly believe that when lightning strikes

it always strikes in the same place twice

There has been no rain

 

 

"to stop the fire"

Therefore

 

 

My make-believe Eden burned to the ground

 

The energy of you

 

 

 

"I still feel"

 

 

 

 when nobody's around

 

 

 

 

 


© 2014 +she plays with matches+



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No rain to stop the raging inferno, yet, I rein. No thunder to chisel away at the sounds of screaming, but I scream thunderously. No relief from the pain...the misery. Yet, pain & misery are my relief.

This was something else, Muse! Ethereal, sublimely creepy...this was VERY good!

The overall presentation was astounding!

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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This is magnificent in its simplicity and profound impactful structure. Wow. I definitely am a new fan, and will be coming back again and again. I know a lot of people don't take RR's and they get lost in the shuffle. If you are so inclined PM me and I will send you links to ones you might like, I think. I have too many to sift through, I think.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

+she plays with matches+

3 Years Ago

I turned my RR's off a long time ago. Now I just read who I want to read. I would love it if you ema.. read more
lots of imagery in this write

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

+she plays with matches+

3 Years Ago

thank you..
 wordman

3 Years Ago

you are welcome
I love this kid as well. He is the peace and calm in the profound storm.

Posted 3 Years Ago


You my friend select sharp and smart Titles, as I always enjoyed your writing always a thrill and excitement...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can always pull up a chair and find a beautiful tear, and a smile, in your library. Amazing piece of a beautiful soul. Thank you so much for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

+she plays with matches+

3 Years Ago

think of it as a tribute to your pen name. lol
Lucifer Jones

3 Years Ago

*smile* That would be an honor... Thanks for the grins...
My make-believe Eden burned to the ground
The energy of you
"I still feel"
when nobody's around"

Very creative verse what this is and your closing is just simply brilliant...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

+she plays with matches+

3 Years Ago

thank you...
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Dye
I like this morbid sort of writing, I mean that as a compliment. I have always been intrigued by some of the darker insights that others may have. I really enjoyed this conversation, as if between friends.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. Stunning piece of poetry.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Dean Kuch said it best. I agree.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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