Dear Lucifer

Dear Lucifer

A Poem by +she plays with matches+

 

 

 

 

 

I am well

 

"thank you"

 

 

You asked about the storm

All I can say is

 

 

Yes

 

 

 it still thunders...

 

 

I truly believe that when lightning strikes

it always strikes in the same place twice

There has been no rain

 

 

"to stop the fire"

Therefore

 

 

My make-believe Eden burned to the ground

 

The energy of you

 

 

 

"I still feel"

 

 

 

 when nobody's around

 

 

 

 

 


© 2014 +she plays with matches+



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No rain to stop the raging inferno, yet, I rein. No thunder to chisel away at the sounds of screaming, but I scream thunderously. No relief from the pain...the misery. Yet, pain & misery are my relief.

This was something else, Muse! Ethereal, sublimely creepy...this was VERY good!

The overall presentation was astounding!

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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humm suggestion...get some water and douse that Lucifer...I am woman hear me pour! ( over your head)
Your writing always has strength and though this one shows weathering a storm..I have no doubt ..if this was a real incident..lucifer would be wise to straighten up... Well Done !

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Renée

4 Years Ago

Who cares if your muse isn't innocent..it is your page..do as you please! I love your writing and I.. read more
+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

thank you for that. I need to hear that my morbid ideas and creativity is warranted. lol
Renée

4 Years Ago

chuckling ( ;
I missed your words, Muse...always the artist. Beautiful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

€v De £'Am0r

4 Years Ago

I understand...every Poet/Writer needs a break every now and then, Muse...to taje in life as it come.. read more
+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

agreed.

Thank you for that validation. Time away is and should be a good thing.
€v De £'Am0r

4 Years Ago

I strongly concur validating your agreement. Thou shall be in contentment. :)
Quietly listens... I've missed you.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

A quiet observer. There's is much to be learned from you...
Took my breath away this one....so unexpected and unique. Short and succinct, it wrapped itself around my brain and yanked to pay close attention, muchly enjoyed. Missed you Muse....great read as always!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda. It was an on the spot automatic write. Ever done one of those? It took less than t.. read more
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Yes those truly come from the gut, heart and soul, you have to write it, you have no choice in the m.. read more
I really enjoyed this :) Go you for being awesome :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

go you? Interesting review, but thank you.
Electric Scribe

4 Years Ago

I am not the best at reviewing, but I get excited for people when they do awesome things. Therefore,.. read more
+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

Stellar..even better. :)
This is a very interesting piece of work Muse, I do like the nature aspects compared to human feelings into it, it says so much about how we can feel on a daily basis, or for a longer period. Thunders without rain are dangerous, they are called "dry thunders" here. Nothing to wet (feed the emotions or ground) or to conduct the electricity... sometimes feeling void is the most dangerous thing a human being can feel, (in general). Then there is a point to (for me) mostly write.

A very powerful piece, in all facets. Thank you.
Good to read you again!

- Elisa

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

Thank you.

You stopping by...just like old times. I've missed you.

4 Years Ago

I've missed you too, and am very happy to be a witness of your beautiful and pure writings...
.. read more
This is a great, really well worded write, Muse - I loved it. I loved the structure and how there was a little conversation going on, awesomesauce.

~ Noodle.

Posted 4 Years Ago


s y e

4 Years Ago

Yes I have, I went a really light red and now I've gone mahogany. :) Ahaha, yep, I'm a true blonde! .. read more
+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

can't change what is in the inside sweetie. :D
s y e

4 Years Ago

Nope, wouldn't want to either.

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