lol, his n****e

lol, his n****e

A Poem by +she plays with matches+

 

 

 

His name is Lee?

 

I guess it could be a "she" named Marie.

 

If it's "his" would you flag me?

If it's "hers" would you ban me?

His dimple...

Her dimple...

It all looks the same to me.

Just like a pimple.

His pimple...

Her pimple...

 

It all seems pretty simple.

What's the diff?

Btw...

nice n****e.

 

 

 

 

 

bwaha ha ha

 


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Author's Note

+she plays with matches+
I had to enter text to prove I was human before posting this.
The text I had to enter:
Mammary
I swear it! lol

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LOL I couldn't resist to review this. It has a super deep tension to a hole of innocence, yet it has the perfect dare a woman needs, to speak out without bounderies, :D lol... Man/Woman all is X and Y generated, we have those little scary genes of each other in our genes... so why not cooperate lol.... (we secretly do already) oh my you provoked with little feathers another time in here, ENJOYED!!!! :D

((HUGS))

xo Eli

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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You make me laugh i need that

Posted 3 Years Ago


Such a catchy title and you as also created your magic with n****e:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Despite the serious side, this has me in stitches! Well done my friend :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Despite the serious side, this has me in stitches! Well done my friend :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


well what's the difference, perhaps the sizes and functionality but in all in all we are humans that do have these body parts. bwahaha, I like this!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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ron
Love this one Muse. For some people one n****e is a fantasy come true, if it belongs to the right person.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Pax
the last time I've read this, it made me smile, now reading it again I smiled even more into a laugh... good one my friend.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this a lot because it washes away identity, really. We are all just n*****s floating around in a sea of dimples and pimples. Humor is a great way to make a point. Great write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a funny poem about of all things n*****s oh and a few dimples and pimples
And being in this
Man this really did make me laugh out loud love that Muse

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I genuinely did LOL which is weird because i'm not entirely sure i got it..... one thing is certain, you're imagination is wild :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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