Classical Dissonance

Definition: (A simultaneous sounding of tones that produces a feeling of tension or unrest and a feeling that further resolution is needed.)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Classical Dissonance

 

Your fine tuning moves me like Beethoven.

Never have I been harmonized this way before.

My toes sweep;

the piano keys beneath my feet.

Our fine drink and lips don't skip a beat.

Linger I do,

in your ingenious composition.

You are....

My love lust; Musician.

 

My own personal Mozart.

Glissando....

Slide me you do, 

across the major minor.

The tempo is soft yet strong.

You play it slow....

you play the chords long.

 

You make love like Bach.

The King and Majesty of classical sound.

Mad you are, when no one's around!

You drive the music; loud and hard!

Creating an opus of orgasmic tremolo.

Your voice and touch is fortissimo.

I feel you strike the C flat deep.

Lovely in your timing and precision.

Finding a release; in your creative vision.

We embrace within the vibrato;

you are.... 

legato.

 

A melody made of rhythm and seduction.

We find intimacy in our creative song.

Finding the half-note in our kiss.

It's your classical dissonance,

that I adore.

 

Give me more!

 

On-core I gasp....

 

On-core!

 

Reviews

[Pax]

I see a dual poem in this romantic harmonic write. A classic touch for the love of music. There is a melodic tune in this write somewhat it can make a person sing the lyrical verses :). sadly, i can't play any musical instrument ~ but it's never too late to learn it, maybe someday ~ hope you too my friend... Great work!

[The Cobra Lounge]

I can't play neither Pax, I actually googed the piano on-line, googled the definitions to all of those fancy words...and tried to write. I did it more for the challenge, trying to write persuasively, even though I know nothing about the piano....I just know I love the music.

[Pax]

google really satisfy our curiosity ~ and I learn a lot from it since I started using it. As you know English is not really my native tongue so I googled every time I find a new word for me…shsss I actually google some words in this poetry :D ~ and oh, music is part of our everyday lives ~ it’s like it’s our partner in our day to day lives…

[The Cobra Lounge]

I google to spell check...lol, so don't feel bad about using it as a crutch. English is my language...but people still throw words out there that make me scratch at my head...yet it is screaming for a definition..so google I must!

[icelandicblue]

A purely melodic experience. This plays across the page.

[Allen Smuckler]

You certainly FELT the music Beth..and deserve one final On-core.
I absolutely loved this metaphorical classical write
allen

[Stacey Watts]

No words I could ever say could complement this beautiful piece. Music strokes the soul and moves the heart. This is very sensual and I am sure a lot of artist by nature feel this kind of passion over their work.

[quinfinn]

this is truly magnificent. imagine all those keys being tinkled by naked toes and think of the crescendos reached in the abstract. if music be the food of love, then play on. unique and interesting perspectives here, excellent. imagine what Ravel would have thought of your "bolero"....gorgeous!

[Nick.B]

Interesting use of words, very sensual and erotic....amazing work

[Kristallo]

Came for the title, was not disappointed. You've married music and poetry here with such strong and intimate expressions, I really enjoyed the sensual play on words and the explosive allusions. The idea itself is incredible, and unique, written with a lusty fervor that leaves the reader lost in translation. Such a great write, as always I am so enamored of your poems. 100/100

[stephen dillon]

so very sexy! i love it

[stephen dillon]

as a multi-instrumentalist myself this sounds like a love letter to classical piano players.great job on the termonology you got it spot on trust me a real musician can spot phonies a mile away

[Audrey Howitt]

This was fun for me to read--I am a classical musician and love to see the vocab used--Brava!