Destroyer

Destroyer

A Poem by Vertigoingnowhere

This bridge we have

Burn it down.

Make sure there’s nothing left

Only ashes on the ground.

The pages I've written,

Shred the evidence.

I can't even be around you

The stench of your arrogance.

I told you everything

Opened all old wounds.

Sat under sunlight

And lights of the moon.

I have so much to say to you 

But it would pointless.

You ruined everything

It was always hopeless.

You're no different than the rest

Just another abuser.

Just another person

Just as tragic as a tumor.

I knew one of these days

You’d push me away

Hard enough that’s is now too late.

I'm back on high alert

I won't again be this bombarded

Raise the walls

Heavily guarded

I hope you'll miss me 

Cause I'll miss you too

You did this to yourself

You had everything to lose.

© 2013 Vertigoingnowhere


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Very deep, compelling message. Nice work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sigh...I can most definitely relate to this feeling. A person taking so much from you, then leaving and leaving you hang out to dry on your own without even a goodbye. My ex was just like this. I gave him all of me, every emotion, every truth in our relationship. After 2 and a half weeks, he decided it was over and he didn't bother answering my questions as to why. He just left and then ignored me whenever I was around, treated me like what we had meant nothing, like I was a piece of trash or something. I promised myself I would never let my guard down that early in a relationship anymore...and get to know people fully for who they are until getting too involved with them. You deserve better anyway, anyone deserves better than this...

Posted 10 Years Ago


so sad poem,may that person suffer a million sorrows :(

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a lot deeper than it appears at first glance! I must say, it was an amazing read, and I found it intriguing, as well as insightful! :) Keep up the fantastic work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Keep the good work! :) It was cool. Good read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Love this. Well done ^_^

Posted 10 Years Ago


A crafted and well executed piece, well done, good read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice poem. Keep on the good work

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Vertigoingnowhere
Vertigoingnowhere

Sarasota, FL



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My name is Hannah. I am 18 years old and a senior in high school. To my wonderment I am survived it. These are my adventurers and devestations as I stand my ground, cuss out society and of course, th.. more..

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