Stay Alive

Lustrous tears of blood
Cascading down your arm
Your wretched face white with pain
Less painful than the sorrow
Carried by your heart
Tormented
Bleeding numbly
Life has long left your body
The heart may beat
The lungs may breathe
But death has settled on your breast
Smileless and hurting
Going through every monotone day
And there is no one to save you
No one who hears your
Listless cries
Ruined
Your butterfly soul crushed
By demon claws
Your body limp with fatigue
As you syphon away the day's pain
How much longer can you endure?
Please stay alive for me..
Don't go away..

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

This is so beautiful,your cry to stay alive
face white with pain,pain and sorrow
heart tormented body without life or a soul
who will save you ,no one will ever hear you
bieng crushed ,body limp..for how long
please stay with me ,stay for me
please never ever go away
what strong shocking words
you made them beat with life
how i loved this
lovely write..

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Thank You ,Craig...that was the idea..I am glad it has worked :)

[An owl on the moon]

Such a longing for life in the depth of horrid pain and loss.. Your words paint the darkest image yet glimmers of hope remain. Here you've given us all courage to never stop hanging on. Powerful.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Thank You for Your kindness, Trevor :) And Your time and..You know..everything..all of these reviews..they mean a lot :)

[Trevor]

this is incredibly sad and very beautiful

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Thank You...You are overly generous...
I am happy to please :)
So many friends of mine struggle with depression and I too, at a time did...
I think it's important for them to see that someone cares..even a little..that someone has felt like that