Pain

I am a dizzy mess

Trying to ignore

The pain

Lying everywhere

Then I touch it

Dazzlingly coy

Since you will not

Go away

Come make yourself

A part of me

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

I dont want to talk about it,for i talked too much..
pain times is too much..it just will never leave
yes it will be part of me,for it has been here too long
i can understand ..you will have to ignore
you will find it difficult ,but step by step
you will succced..pain could be killed and controlled
in skilled hands
lovely write..

[Alicia Schroeder]

I like how you worded this, "come make yourself part of me" totally wraps it all together, I love it.

[Mindy]

extraordinary.

[alan peter kelly]

a perfect reflection of acceptance :)

[Emily B]

embracing that we can't rid ourselves of . . . brilliant

[Jeff]

Great work here.

[Anicca]

Lovely, I like this and it says a lot, nice write!