Crimson Leaf

Crimson Leaf

A Poem by A.A.Romanczuk

Autumn leaves signs of leisurely creeping in

One crimson leaf like lipstick on his sheets

Among a sea of green...

Left there to mesmerize me

© 2011 A.A.Romanczuk


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

lovely write..

Posted 12 Years Ago


oh, oh . . . I got to the woods one day when the leaves were mostly green and when I left in the afternoon they were creeping slowly to yellow

but now there are so many colors

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the fall, it's such a beautiful time of year! I love you're similes!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is a glorious wonder you create in the autumn world... it is beginning to sing in colors, and you highlight that first glimpse so profoundly... Beautiful vision...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the focus , the angle , the perspective , you should be a photographer

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Baby...baby....baby.....I love that feeling. One of my favorite season fades.....how great is the color and the quality of light. New toughskins for school, new shoes, football, homecoming, girls in sweaters.......yummy. Loved it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

268 Views
6 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on September 20, 2011
Last Updated on September 20, 2011

Author

A.A.Romanczuk
A.A.Romanczuk

NJ



About
“A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world.” - Oscar Wilde Feel free to check out my first publis.. more..

Writing
Snow Snow

A Poem by A.A.Romanczuk


Home Home

A Poem by A.A.Romanczuk



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..