i love you

not that great but it's still my work:)hope you like!!!!

through notes past in class

and talks through the hall's 

i can tell how much 

you admire me

through hugs and talks 

i can tell

you want me back 

but you do know 

that i dont want you 

you broke my heart once

 and i know you'll do it again

you said"please dont be mad"

i told you "no"

you said i love you 

and i ignore you 

but inside im screaming 

i love you !

but as time goes on

i wish you woud see 

how i look at you 

because my looks say it all

as i go to sleep at night

i dream about you 

cause i loved you 

at one point 

in my life <3

Reviews

[Jessie]

I like this poem. And I can really relate to this too. Nice imagery too. Keep writing can't wait to read more.

[Khaotic Katastrophe]

good imagery. nice write.