Critique Your Very Own Selves Critics

Critique Your Very Own Selves Critics

A Poem by Mario Vitale
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A look within the prison of a critic

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Critique Your Own Selves Critics

 

why is it I never in my life gave cadence as to critic another poets work

yet they find it perfectly acceptable to rate my own submissions

they aren't Jesus they don't walk on water so why should I bother with them

some are intellectualized wandering wizards others need attention like a baby

there I gave you your treat so wander back to your warm spot and shut your mouths

it doesn't help me when you crtic it just makes me think of what a perfect a*s you are

going off someone cause of stupid grammattical errors we can't take it with us when we die

they themselves are mister perfect never doing anything wrong

 

see positive enforcement strengthens the heart where as negativity brings you down

plus who are they anyways:

Stay optimistic, even if you're
facing a set back. There are
many stages we go through in
our lives, but we manage, to get
back, on track. All good things
are possible, if you have
confidence in yourself and do as
much as you can. No one has
accomplished anything, in one day,
there has to be, a plan! Establishing
a routine, takes time, but it can lead
to many big opportunities, down the
road. At this point, you're bound to
find a way, to unburden, your heavy
load!
Let the good times outshine the bad times
Let the laughter drown out the tears
Let the light chase away the darkness including all your fears...
Turn your pain into strength and smile for you are alive, making all things possible but only possible if you try.

The critic is the frustrated wannabe who picks at others to compensate for his insecurities and to boost his delusions of grandeur. Most are moderately adequate poets at best and find it pleasurable to take it out on those who have some talent….Leave them on the "ignore" shelf.

 

© 2018 Mario Vitale


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Mario Vitale
Mario Vitale

Wolcott, CT



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