Warrior Poet Zen 1-2

Warrior Poet Zen 1-2

A Poem by H.L. Cerveise
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This is dedicated to all the warrior poets on this site and around the world.

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Warrior Poet Zen 1-2

I think upon the structures that we attempt.
Both rhyme and free style we should never hold in contempt.
How the words fall across the page we place with great concern.
Nevertheless, the meanings to those words we must discern.
The abilities given to us are both a blessing and a curse.
We must be driven to show the bounty behind the verse. 

© 2016 H.L. Cerveise


Author's Note

H.L. Cerveise
I must give credit to Nessly for this writing. It was her words in the review of WPZ 1-1, "...I think we as poets strive for meaning behind our rhyme..." that inspired this second verse in this chapter.

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Loved it!!
Keep up the great work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


H.L. Cerveise

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.
Well said. That is what a true poet does almost by instinct.

Posted 7 Years Ago


H.L. Cerveise

7 Years Ago

Very true my fellow warrior poet.
Beautiful i agree with ur each line.

Posted 7 Years Ago


H.L. Cerveise

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. I am glad you saw a worth in this writing.
So very beautiful..... originality of thought, that is how your poems are. Love

Posted 7 Years Ago


H.L. Cerveise

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. Thank you for your kind words.
this is beautiful! i loved it!
keep writing :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


H.L. Cerveise

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review. I am glad you loved it.
You've captured the essence of what it means to be a poet and/or writer beautifully. I'm so happy you were inspired by something I wrote. You took those words and put meaning behind them. Thanks so much!

Posted 7 Years Ago


H.L. Cerveise

7 Years Ago

I am glad you liked it. There is just such a synergy that happens here. The muse of creation keeps b.. read more
Nessly

7 Years Ago

I know! The last poem I wrote until a couple of weeks ago was, "The Fallen and Damned," which was ab.. read more
I agree and liked these words.
"The abilities given to us are both a blessing and a curse.
We must be driven to show the bounty behind the verse. "
The above lines were my favorite. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 7 Years Ago


H.L. Cerveise

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing my writing. That last line was one I worked on for the longest. It always pl.. read more
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

Was a very good verse and you are welcome.

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Added on June 27, 2016
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H.L. Cerveise
H.L. Cerveise

Penn Yan, NY



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