Lady

Going through some strange emotions. Not much of a poem... just getting some feelings off my back.

I am afraid

I feel helpless

I don't know what to do

Help me God

Help me gods

Anyone who will listen

I am so afraid

Reviews

[Laura E. Aranda]

Good luck in the contest. This was a desparate piece clenching the readers' heart and interest. Some things such as this need not alot of words.......cheers,lea

[Helena]

Such emotion tumbling out from this poem, intense and strangely I had the vision of that painting "The Scream" whilst I was reading.

This certainly reads as a cry for help, but also I got the feeling that things start to turn around when
you have feelings of this sort and that God does answer this primal cry. At least that's what I have
found, and I pray that this will happen to you.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us for the "Loneliness" contest.

Take care

Helena

[angelina neves]

Oh! I agree with Adela: fascinating, intense...

[Adela Muresan]

:)) I like it :D .
Fascinating how so few words can capture such an intense feeling :) .I'm sure pretty much anyone can relate to it�

A.M.

[Kaela Craven]

Are you planning to add on to it?