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Why can't I let it go

Why can't I let it go

A Story by horizon

I am too weak To go away from you...
Too low to get Up..
When you said it's all over
I couldn't feel my pulse
It seems as if my whole world has fallen apart
Why can't you understand my whole life starts from you and you are the one who make me feel alive..
Have you ever thought Why can't I go away from you..
Why I insist you to stay..
I know you love me more than i do..
We made for each other but we are not together
When you said it's all over
I didn't had courage to let it go
Beautiful relations are meant to glow
Not to survive
This was the reason I didn't let it go..
I know you too didn't wanna let it go
You came to me and said
I LOVE YOU silly girl
~And I LOVE YOU ToO S.S~

© 2016 horizon



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ahh. . . that's great. . love in the air. . Good good . . . keep penning down ur feelings. . . anyone can fall in love with dese lines than why not ur lover. . . hehe. . very honestly expressed. . . I

Posted 10 Months Ago


horizon

10 Months Ago

thank you for reading....:):)
True feelings revealed in simple words. I am able to relate every bit of emotion that is present in this poem. Very well done, Horizon.

Posted 1 Year Ago


horizon

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much mam...thanks for stopping by and reading
Though a poetry made me feel like a story at the same time. It would be interesting if it has a sequel with more description of reasons why he is denying love.

Good job.

Posted 1 Year Ago


horizon

1 Year Ago

thank you...i'll try for the sequel...thanks for your time reading...
Nicely said. Passionate read yet entertaining. Many great lines! Tyfs

Posted 1 Year Ago


horizon

1 Year Ago

Thank you Cyprian...glad you thought it thoughtful...
Cyprian Van Dyke

1 Year Ago

You're most welcome.
You're young and no doubt attractive... Let him go. He's made his choice - let him deal with the consequences and don't go grovelling to him. You'll soon find others and look back and think, 'Thank goodness it didn't continue'.

I didn't understand why 'beautiful relations are meant to glow and not to survive'. Why is that?

Posted 1 Year Ago


horizon

1 Year Ago

Thanks for reviewing...but it's not over ...the line means that beautiful relations must shine out f.. read more
This is heart touching...
I can feel every sentence you've penned. And I can also feel the great guys required to write this along with some precious tears....I have been there so its much relatable to me.. I wish everything gets fine again... in one way or the other.... Anyway, by hook or by crook, you both be together again sharing that eternal love.... for ever and ever....
Just have patience... and trust yourself more than anything else. Your family is your first responsibility so try to serve that first and leave everything else to your destiny and God... Everything will follow you IF you are following the right path to your responsibility..........
Good luck for your future my dear....👍

Posted 1 Year Ago


horizon

1 Year Ago

Thanks for understanding...but I've loved someone...and now both my family and him are my responsibi.. read more
One thing that your writings contain is the innocence, you carry the real meaning of love in your life in your works... Here you have spoken something that every relationship go through but many just let it go, and that is what the reason behind a relationship not getting successful... But the ones who hold on to the relationship with love even in the time when the relationship facing some hard time, they find the real beauty of love... Greatly expressed...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 1 Year Ago


horizon

1 Year Ago

You got the depth of my feeling...wish I cud tell him the way I feel abt him..but I think somewhere .. read more

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Added on October 31, 2016
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